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looks good so far do you have certain things in mind like is he going to join Luffy or start his own crew?
wrong story man I think you posted the wrong chapter
wrong story lol
then maybe more of a balancing effect like this one but instead of taking power it's gifted for each soul released he is already working on balancing light and dark why not add more incentive
if you stick with the Egyptian theme might I suggest snake snake fruit model aphophis it's a massive serpent made of flame and chaos that devours all it encounters
no problem sometimes it's the most bizarre worlds that make the strongest people
she's a witch who specializes in chaos magic or something similar don't remember exactly but she's from soul eater a world of reapers and madness a great world to grab soldiers from since some can literally turn into living weapons that when fed enough souls can turn into even stronger weapons
I have another one how familiar are you with Dr. Medusa
plus she will be the easiest one for child birth cause like almost a hundred kids
if i may make a suggestion if your not to far along why not add Charlotte linlin from a different timeline she's a absolute baddie when she was younger plus if it's before the chef finds her she will be as easy as clay to mold the soul soul fruit is still a top devil fruit plus her steel balloon body