you have the same problem with your other novel too. like when Mc was talking with his slave, other high cultivation people talking with each other or weaker person. when any one of them talks like that it's very much unbecoming of them. It reduces their status /dignity and seriousness of any kind of situation.

You should stop using words like "wanna" and "cause" every other time. its very irritating and informal, I can't take any character seriously because of it.

what a surprise, I had no idea.

thank god it's not Zhai Yang.

ahhh....The cringe

Yes he has free will, but as you said he's mcs slave. And there's nothing to force here, Mc will only be letting a slave know his place. If a slave will disobey Mc on a simple order like "don't ask questions, only do your work" then the slave contract is basically useless. Not just Robert, let's say Mc gets subordinates/slaves in future, will he go around explaing his every plans to them? why should he? their only job is to obey and mcs job is make them do that.

This Robert is mcs slav.e not his ally nor someone of equal status. Slav.es are to obey their masters only, not question them. MC should not be required to explain anything to his sla.ve. Disappointed.

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yeah genius, that's why you got betrayed by your "lover". Basic 3y old level mistake.

so, use all the money to buy formation flags? or use 30% to buy formation base?

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sigh what idiocy. a peasant is a peasant, no matter if he's from a large town or small village, there should be differences but not this big. MC while looking like a normal weak peasant have so much gold, if this behavior doesn't scream "I want to cause unnecessary trouble for myself" I don't know what is.

reread the 3rd chap, you did say Mcs father wasn't a mage, however you also mentioned his father to be stronger, so i would assume even if hes not comparable to peak apprentices, he would be quite strong. Not to mention being a noble, having capabilities to awaken apprentices and possessing a spell, His family is not totally ignorant of mages. So mcs country bumpkin like act, where he knows pretty much nothing about mages is quite illogical. its not like this a average magic novel where mc reincarnate in some playboy nobles, so they dont know anything about magic world.

Mc is part of a magus noble family, even if there is no official mage, there are possibly mid to peak apprentice mages but him acting like a complete country bumkin with no knowledge about mages is ridiculous. At the very least have some knowledge about the academy he's going, like the 'going to the academy in one month' part. like bruh. it would've been fine if he's just a mortal noble, but no he's from a magus family. The way Mc is acting is really unrealistic and ridiculous. The fact he's just simply thrown in the magus world, while being part of a magus family with no extra preparation or knowledge is just unreasonable. it just feels like Mc is a lucky commoner, not a member of magus noble family.

you could use it as a character Dev, and say make Mc say he made mistake in next chapters. But it does feel kinda useless, since he already got betrayed once and had plenty of time in the void to become the best version of himself, not to mention as a noble in a magic world he should've been educated.

not much of a cautious Mc, huh

what? if you are not in earth how you will call police?

Anyone would be blind to treat a 2.7 meter muscular giant like that, guess Chinese characters have that perk naturally.