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  • Polat13
    Polat138d
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    Thanks for the chapter. Are you gonna continue the reincarnated as a dragonewt story someday? Because I discovered it while looking at your Storys and really liked it, especially because there aren‘t many similar fanfictions like that one, so with the potential of your story that the First few chapters showed, it could become quite popular if you decide to continue it

    Ch 4 Reunion after two years
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  • Polat13
    Polat137mth
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    Great chapter. I Hope you continue to Post new chapters without stopping. If you think about dugu bo‘s partly/mostly solved poison Problem and new cultivation method, he should reach Title douluo very soon (1-2 years). I Hope you give him a 100k Spirit Ring somehow which would make him far stronger than Canon and could directly give him Another Level because of the Huge Spirit Power it carries. With the solved poison problem and the cultivation method, he could then Progress even more to a super douluo (Level 95-98, if I’m Not wrong) and become a feared powerhouse because of his deadly aoe poison attacks due to which even attacks with high numbers of people would be useless and only backfire. Not to mention the Risk of dying from his poison, even if you are Able to beat him can make people fearful of provoking him which would also Protect the Mc, even if he shows his Talent because noone would attack him because of possible consequences. But please don‘t take any offense, no matter if you use my idea or not, I will still read your Story because it is very promising and interesting

    Ch 9 Ch.9 : Hollow Beast Academy
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  • Polat13
    Polat137mth
    Replied to Nevermindthename

    Maybe cause his father is quite strong now and they don‘t need to hide as much. I mean dugu bo will probably reach title douluo in max 1-2 years because of his partly/mostly solved poison problem and his new cultivation technique which Made his cultivation Speed Rapid. In addition he could Maybe aim for a 100k Spirit Ring which would make him far stronger and then Progress even Further (Not to mention that the 100k Ring could give him another Level directly) to become an absolute nightmare to Battle because if you Hope to beat him with numbers, that would only backfire because of his aoe poison attacks which will make everyone fearful of fighting him because of the risks it has for them

    Ch 9 Ch.9 : Hollow Beast Academy
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  • Polat13
    Polat138mth
    Commented

    +1

    B) Orochimaru
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    Naruto: Symbiote Queen [Warring Clans Era]
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  • Polat13
    Polat138mth
    Replied to PrincessThrone

    The problem of the chidori as far as i know ist that it gives you tunnel vision and the only way to work around that is the sharingan. Purple lightning is basically just a better version of lightning which negates all drawbacks of things Like chidori while being more controllable. Of course it should be something that requires extreme mastery of lightning because almost no one possesses stronger versions of lightning except very few people from kumo who are known for specialising in thunder jutsu since the founding of the village

    Then his next goal was developing Chidori into Purple lightning. No way he was going to expend more chakra for Sharingan.
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  • Polat13
    Polat1311mth
    Replied to Madao420

    Nope, kushina will get the probably get the kyuubi as she has the special chakra required to seal it in Herself and it would be a necessary boost to make her reach as far as possible in terms of power as it gives a massive boost (Naruto had a giant boost after getting and mastering kuramas power)

    Kagutsuchi replied with a determined expression, "Yes. After all, the Uzumaki clan's sealing techniques are the best. Therefore, it is only fitting that the tailed beasts should be sealed within members of the Uzumaki clan. It is also your task to select eight individuals who are capable of having a tailed beast sealed within them."
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  • Polat13
    Polat131yr
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    Yes. You can even portray him as a symbol of worship and a goal to strive for, if you add him to Their earlier history. Or at least let him make connections with highranking people who know him so that he can do more things, like taking a teaching position during one of harrys school years for example, as an arc before the main events in avengers begin.

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  • Polat13
    Polat131yr
    Replied to Brokedepressed

    That‘s a good idea as it would make them see him in a better light Because as far as I know, before joining akatsuki, the only thing he did that was not good was leaving the village. As long as he doesn‘t make an enemy out of the nations and helps in the big battles at the end of the war like in canon, he will be seen as one of the two Heroes and could do what he wants, either going back to konoha or travelling (I like travelling better, where he learns many things and grows stronger while visiting other villages until boruto, if you continue the story that far)

    Ch 1 I am Sasuke Uchiha
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  • Polat13
    Polat131yr
    Replied to The_Essence_

    As far as i understand, each permanent copied quirk still takes one of his copy slots, but doesn‘t need any hair anymore or has a time limit after which he needs to update it with the hair. And One for all everytime that time is up, the stockpile would vanish because the next time he updates his copy of one for all, it would be a new one and the old one still Vanishes. Until it is permanent, it wouldn‘t be of any use and i think his first permanent quirk wasn‘t one for all but another one, which would explain why he thinks high spec is more important, because his memorys are disappearing right now and he can always take one for all next year

    " That's true, especially because you can't use All Might's quirk without making it permanent, all the stockpiling is gone once it disappears, you might as well take super regeneration. "
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  • Polat13
    Polat131yr
    Commented

    Does she really love him or is it just manipulation by either fate or something like a love potion?

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  • Polat13
    Polat131yr
    Commented

    You can give him Wind nature aside from fire and Lightning. Wind is is not only very strong, it even suits him because of things like kirin. you could let him be able to make entire Storms later if you make him combine these three elements with each other like a fire tornado amplified with wind and thunder or giant dragon like techniques where he makes giant dragons From different elements and even combine/fuse them together as something like an ultimate move. I hope you continue this story with regular new chapters as I really like sasuke mc stories and really hope that it doesn‘t get dropped every time I find a new one

    Ch 1 In The Naruto World
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  • Polat13
    Polat131yr
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    If he really is the protagonist you can make him learn Sage mode and after he gets hagoromos chakra in the War, he can get The 6 paths sage mode similar to canon Naruto and if you want upgrade his rinnegan (double rinnegan in both eyes or one 9 tomoe rinnegan (rinnesharingan) instead of the canon 6 tomoe rinnegan). Just don‘t nerf him because your story has good potential especially because sasuke is a really good character if you have him as the mc

    Ch 1 Reunion
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  • Polat13
    Polat131yr
    Commented

    Let him live. Even if he experiments on humans, that can be regulated in the future like in boruto. He is a great partner and even greater teacher to have because of his knowledge and ability to teach all of which can help sasuke

    Ch 13 S Class Rouge Ninja
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  • Polat13
    Polat131yr
    Commented

    How far in the Past is he gonna be born? You could make the mc get to know the 100k years plus Beasts from the plot during the time he grows and the Beasts are still young. He could be friends with them and maybe even have a love interest Among them

    Ch 1 INTRO
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  • Polat13
    Polat131yr
    Commented

    Good idea with mj‘s thoughts about her weakness which you could develop into giving her and ned powers. For her maybe something similar to peter (superpowers) where they fight together, while ned could learn to be a sorcerer which is fitting (he‘s a nerd and studies things and has shown talent in being a sorcerer in the spider man movie as far as I remember)

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  • Polat13
    Polat131yr
    Commented

    Akatsuki, after nagatos death he could save konan and Begin to be in a relationship with her as long as you make him have a good relationship with her before that

    Join the Akatsuki to accomplish the Plan
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  • Polat13
    Polat131yr
    Replied to Crimson1997

    Thanks for the answer

    Ch 1 Two Sides of the Same Coin
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  • Polat13
    Polat131yr
    Commented

    How long will it take until she gets emotional again or does she stay like that?

    Ch 1 Two Sides of the Same Coin
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  • Polat13
    Polat131yr
    Commented

    Maybe something simple like destruct-ive/ion lightning or anihilation lightning because it is basically a more powerful variant of lightning which is already the most destructive, chaotic and hardest to control basic element in naruto

    Ch 1 Extra Chapter: Kakashi and Guy's Showdown of Youth!
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  • Polat13
    Polat131yr
    Replied to LordValmar

    Yeah, he could also help tony upgrade his reactor and his armor faster to make him stronger than his mcu Counterpart

    Ch 33 C33 Superhero Team-up
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