Ok, so this isn't meant to be mean, but are you using chat GPT? Cause I've noticed a lot of similarities to how the bot talks. I still love the book, I'm just wondering.

I bet it's a family member.

i read it as vanilla not villain 😂

May you find the inner peace you seek, and always cherish the memories of those departed. For the highest honor one can do for those gone is to always remember and keep them close in mind for doing so, they are never truly gone.May you find the answers you seek to ease your pain that will never completely fade.

Well i think it's pretty self explained. The Celestial part comes from the soul that was in his wand and the elf part from calabrimbor. (Sorry for the butchering)

Hello folks of Webnovel, it is the one and only Altered, I come with praises for the mastermind Burnable and another of his amazing works. I normally don't do reviews, but i have always enjoyed Burnables' stories and this one is no different. If you're looking for a subdued slice of life that doesn't take hundreds of chapters for an arc then this is the story for you. So I implore you to give the story a chance. Happy reading everyone.

Hey Burnable, are you using the same "magic is everywhere" like you did in the STG FF or is magic centered only on earth? If so then you can build an observatory for the centaurs so they can observe the stars in more detail. Also, just an idea, but make some floating waterways for the more aquatic magical species to move around on the islands. And, just as a passing thought, what about making the underside of the islands into towns as well with inverted gravity so nocturnal creatures can roam about at any time. Plus how cool would it be to look up (down) and see an Ocean overhead.

Why not upgrade the Mako as well. He could put in a teleport rune to make it return to the Normandy whenever and also add some more umph to the thrusters, plus all the other things one can think of.

I can neither confirm or deny that accusation.

That's my bad. I have his entire story fleshed out, but lost motivation to write him. I'm not sure what the future will hold but I'll do my best to put a chapter out every now and again.

So I added almost all upgrades from the Spartan program, not just the II'2. Look up the modifications new Spartans have to undertake and that should clear up some of the picture for you if you still have any questions.

This is only one of the many pitstops that Jason will make in his long journey through life and death. Too much time is just as bad as not enough of it. Yes I could have made him any other race, but I'm a speciest. Humans forever until we finally destroy ourselves.

Well in the fandom it said it would only allow the user to go for forty minutes before the heart would explode. I left it to our so Jason can always go that speed without any repercussions.

I'm not too sure. That's what fandom said was Augmented for the Spartans.

Agreed, but they are way too overused. So instead of a dragon "pet" he has a Griffon as one. Plus I've got something in-store for later. You guys will love it.

I thought about it, I just never wrote it down, plus Marcus doesn't really deal with anything that messes with the mind a whole lot. The Synths however are all connected together and work like a hive but with individual personalities present in their meat suits. So even if a Synth "dies" it's only losing the suit it wore. Kinda like that one movie with everyone using Synths to do everything instead of their real bodies.

Kinda, I have like 5 more chapters wrote up but they became dialogue heavy which kinda killed it for me. And one of the best features in Mass Effect is its dialogue so...