Sasha_Reaper
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I love Fate.
2020-02-24 JoinedUkraine
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Sasha_Reaper8dCommentedCh 82 [82] Shock and Awe- Sasha_Reaper23dCommentedCh 141 [141] Congratulatory Honeymoon? Or a Battle More Dangerous?
- Sasha_Reaper24dReplied to The_ArkhonCh 66 [66] He's Still Alive
- Sasha_Reaper24dCommentedCh 66 [66] He's Still Alive
- Sasha_Reaper24dCommentedCh 60 Chapter 60 Wonder Woman Is Alive, Breaches Everywhere
- Sasha_Reaper24dCommentedCh 41 40. Lilja means Lily
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- Sasha_Reaper1mthCommentedCh 39 [39] The Best Gift in the World
- Sasha_Reaper1mthCommentedCh 52 Chapter 52 Bruno Mannheim, Traitor
- Sasha_Reaper1mthCommentedCh 16 016
- Sasha_Reaper2mthCommentedCh 498 498: The Overlay; the Merge of Dreams and Reality
- Sasha_Reaper2mthCommentedCh 25 [25] Living is for Peace of Mind
- Sasha_Reaper2mthPosted
I can say that I liked the story, but I found the second half less engaging than the first. Especially the Graveyard arch (I call it that, a bit boring for me). In terms of problems, I would probably highlight the grammar. I read through a translator, but occasionally there are moments where the text sits. And so I want to thank you for this story and hope that your next fanfic will be even better).
- Sasha_Reaper2mthCommentedCh 492 492: The Hundred-Year War
- Sasha_Reaper2mthCommentedCh 49 Meeting Athena
- Sasha_Reaper2mthCommentedCh 483 483: A Hoax or The Real Deal?
- Sasha_Reaper2mthCommentedCh 481 481: Celestialsapien? Well.
- Sasha_Reaper2mthCommentedCh 17 Introduction