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What is the full link to your discord

Smaller head

This is another example

This is his body byt A greyish black exoskeleton

Sorry i dont like harems but he will a love interest

Third from what i know and good job

Its just going become cliche and boring

Dont like this novel, rudra is annoying

Why does Xiao Chen let Adhalia act like she is high up in the clan, also it’s annoying that almost everytime both that orc girl and her are on screen they fight, then the Mc is just making this a modern civilization, its going to get boring when all they need is gunpowder, bye this novel was goood not no more.

Yes

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Have yall seen the pattern that when there is a Harry Potter fanfic the mc is incredibly rude, also forced to be the descendant of merlin or salazar, then also finds out there is other things than just the magical world. Quite cliche but whatever

I dont like rose, like at all, this novel is turning more to a harem with basically all his alive friends being girls, Hermione would be a better love interest or that asian girl.

Also please dont make this a big faction building novel, just a small group(5-15), or a medium size crew, please or atkeast consider it

Also kinda of a bummer that he doesnt have the force but understandable

With the Dna resequencer will he give himself powers, genetic powers i mean. Kinda of like if it was natural like in this one novel with the nqme that is something along the lines of alien evolution, there is an alien that breathes out fire through a chemical reaction, obvioaly not exactly like that but similar.

Shouldn’t ha saved bucky, because now he IS actually gonna be dead in the future if old age, unless you give him immortality which is just going to make this fan fic a cliche, but you have successfully captured my attention so i will stay, 😈MORE😈

Paragraph comments i mean.