You could possibly move faster if you spun 180 degrees each step. So one step forward and one step backward. However backward running is less efficient. So probably not. For those that claim that parallell running is faster, why dont we see it in competitions? Running and jumping. However fighting might be better since it allows you to present the side in front instead of the chest. But that is a small application. And you rarely want to accelerate as fast as possible for long in a fight, as it makes you predictable.

this is it, if stats is an important part, pay attention. 10000points, is how many monsters? earlier each early e-grade monster was 200 points each. the first Day before resting he killed 29 +1 intermediate, some trees, a bunch of small groups of monsters and helped a group with a large number of monsters. after two more days, he has earned points for approx 50 early grade e mobs (200points×50 ). that is less then the first hunting! im gone, tell me if you get your numbers to match more than what you want him to have. i Will Come back.

last chapter he used an hour to kill 14 wolves concealed from a tree with a bow! and he ran out of arrows. bad writing?

so he brings a Max of 360 arrows with a storage item( one shot every 10 sec for an hour)? bad planning. Also over 100 arrows to kill 30 wolves in an hour, but 10 of them in the first volley, unlikely unless specific tactics are used. describe better the combat or if you want to be sloppy, write later, not an hour later. you have done this before with the kobolds, using 10 min in close combat. 10 min in close combat with or without weapons is a loooong time. especially for agile fighters with more offencive then defencive power.

first time?! All he has been doing is training! For 80% of the novel. can you please write something more than training logs? more dialoge more worldbuilding. less "train, eat, sleep & repeat"

I mean, something that is 1/4 bigger(based on your measures) than the original is not much bigger. the "hedgehog" is much bigger then the original. if size was a factor in power(as it seems it sometimes is for beasts). a polar bear 1/4 stronger + magic should not be an opponent that is unsurvivable for the current MC.

as in a title? be more specific next time. if this is how it goes i am gone. I usually dont Read chapter titles as a message from writer to reader. good luck with your novel!

not much bigger then a real ice bear, unless it is measured standing on all four legs and not on two legs.

i hope he has a cover for the sword, or he would cutting himself a lot. a sharp sword cant be touched at the edge. using it on the shoulders would result in injury.

because, where does he flush his droppings to. either he builds a tank (that has to be emptied) or it goes downstream er in the underground Waters(big risk of contamination). or ut goes to a bucket/tub outside and is used for fertilizer. 2nd without a waterlock om the pipes the sewage gases will Rise and constantly stink the place up. (worse than the pop in the bucket system and empty it right away). and bamboo pipes is probably not the best for avoiding clogging (and he probably has to demolish the clogged part and reconstruct ut). so a flush toilet is waaay down the List of comforts.

the air resistance midt be bigger!😁🤪

I think that the author by now has established that his fiction is purely imgination, and regular laws of space, physics and biologi does not apply. I Will consider MC to be an alien humanoid om Both worlds.

question, how hard/ fast do you have to throw/hit someone to escape a truck-kun at 120km/h. I think truck-kun has two victims today!

how can you train more than other people and walk everywhere? option 1. walk faster then a car option 2. dont go anywhere.

who is this dojo? Joe did he Get off?

there can be too much of a good thing, and this is way too much unrealistic romance! i'm out. good potential, too much sappy relationship daydreaming.

how can you look surprised without it showing on your face? did his little finger do the "surprised nail" look?

too many typos and bad phrasing. the storytelling seems to be clairvoyant, it can tell what will be useful not what might. no depth, only description of actions. I am sorry, I am leaving. good luck

I approve of the river! it is great

lol disposable thumbs, get rid of them!