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Jasper has magic now? How did he vanish them?
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Don't rewrite it. Its great as is.
Dude this is your story.
How does someone go from Flander to Riverland?
Yes to Underworld. Big no to shadow hunters.
Author this is your story, the only criticism you should even partly care about is grammar corrections. Don't pay attention to people who don't like the direction uou are writing the story.
'Hero of the slime'? what???