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The whole story gives me a headache, why isn’t the mc looking for a way to get soul bound weapons out of the other world (game)? Why is he always giving everything away? He doesn’t pickup loot, he has an ability like telekinesis use it to bring all loot to MC. With all the money his getting I would buy land build me a compound building store everything I like in it. He doesn’t know what’s going to happen in the future but he doesn’t care about anything and even tells friends not to play too much. Even after knowing that with hight lvl you can also have power in their world, I’m dropping this novel.
It was fine until the main character started sharing his powers with everyone. The storyline would have been much better if he remained on Earth, gained the ability to enter games or movies, and later retrieve items from those worlds. I would probably still stop reading it if the MC tells everyone about his abilities.
Perhaps he should consider involving the entire class in the project lol. If I were the main character, I would have simply asked Peter to borrow the laptop and create the app. Obtaining information on starting a company is easily achievable through a simple internet search. This main character appears to lack foresight.
The story began promisingly, but it became frustrating as every time the main character grew stronger, the gods reset him, stripping away his progress. This repetitive cycle made the story lose its appeal, especially when the main character's neutral affiliation initially protected him from the gods, only for him to be attacked later despite regaining that affiliation.