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2020-02-19 JoinedCameroon
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  • Ghassan_
    Ghassan_19d
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    Should I say I'm speechless as to how you came up with this imaginations... Idk I love your writing style and words of choice. Just a little more push in describing and you're perfect. Thanks for this book馃槉

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    The Darkest Kingdoms
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  • Ghassan_
    Ghassan_1mth
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    Like I said within chapters, you should be proud of yourself. Your description is very comprehensive for me as a reader and author, it's not easy to get someone stuck into a story. But your first paragraph said a lot. I was able to see the scene in the play. I meant it when I said I wanted to read your book. Anyway, can't say much other than you are talented and keep on with the good work! Also...merci pour le block.

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    The Legendary F Rank
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  • Ghassan_
    Ghassan_1mth
    Commented

    He will get used to this new life. Just imaging if this chance was given to me. Damn! Thanks a lot for the chapter. It was remarkable

    Ch 1 Broken Memories.
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  • Ghassan_
    Ghassan_1mth
    Commented

    Second chance of a living son. Grateful to make things right. Lucky you

    Some time had passed and Haru was now alone in a bed back at their house. He had come to understand the situation he was in. He just couldn't believe it. What was he supposed to do now? He had been reincarnated. And these people were now his parents.
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  • Ghassan_
    Ghassan_1mth
    Commented

    lol. I see your readers are obsessed with certain things. Anyway, every author is proud to see such. Funny memeories馃槄

    "Yeah, I'm tired. Now if you would be ever so kind. Please take this to be cleaned. He took off the mask and handed it to the soldier. Long black hair fell out from underneath his mask. It was shoulder length and it looked like he hadn't slept for a few days with the dark circles beneath his eyes.
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  • Ghassan_
    Ghassan_1mth
    Commented

    Your describing is so good and direct to be your first book. You must be proud of yourself And the story is very intriguing. Can't get enough.

    The darkness fluttered in the wind. It was a man. Dressed in all black. He had a long dark robe that was now stained red. There were drops of blood scattered across his clothes. But his facial expressions were hidden by the white mask he was wearing. It was all white but was now stained red as blood dripped down it. The only distinguishing feature was the number one written on the centre of his head.
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  • Ghassan_
    Ghassan_1mth
    Commented

    The third person, POV was the right choice. I can so much relate with the characters

    "W-What is that!?" The behemoth of a man said as the figure grew closer and closer. It came closer and closer before suddenly stopping at the gate.
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  • Ghassan_
    Ghassan_1mth
    Commented

    I love your description. The start is just great!

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  • Ghassan_
    Ghassan_2mth
    Posted

    You are something inside another. I'm amazed by your words of choice and plot. Again so many people find it hard in writing a synopsis but you did it fairly. I haven't completed but just couldn't wait to give this review. Keep up the good work

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    Outcast Twin
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  • Ghassan_
    Ghassan_3mth
    Posted

    I was satisfied with the description, plot, that's just great. Everyone is able to fully understand and ride into the story and that's what is important. Being able to connect with the characters is amazing to me and not all writers give this chance to their audience maybe because they try adding a lot of complicated stuff to make it mature and most readers end up being confused. Yours wasn't that way and wasn't so plain as well so good job here! Voting one more time for you...

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    The Face Behind the System
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  • Ghassan_
    Ghassan_3mth
    Commented

    Same here. I love your writing style and how you describe every passage

    The streets were dark and empty, with nobody walking around at 2 AM, despite the refreshing coolness of the night, compared to the muggy summer day before, a small, slight breeze ruffling his hair every now and then. The occasional rumble of loud engines on the busy dual carriage way, not too far from Xiao Ying, was the only real noise in the area, that main road towering above him on a bridge quite a bit behind the sleepy neighbourhood he was walking down.
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  • Ghassan_
    Ghassan_3mth
    Replied to Sigheti

    Are you on the Webnovel forum? if so, you could join this group "Author's and Reader's thoughts" I can't really explain everything here but when you get there, you'll see the welcoming message and reason it was created

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    Endbringer
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  • Ghassan_
    Ghassan_3mth
    Replied to Sigheti

    That's thoughtful of you.

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  • Ghassan_
    Ghassan_3mth
    Replied to Ghassan_

    There's more to that and it's a package that has not been unveiled yet. His dad and other antagonists will be a lot of stumbling blocks for their love life. Roy will be more of trying to get revenge for his dad and also helping along with Rex to bring peace and put down all those evil people in high personalities, including his dad. It's so broad that I can't really explain here but if you finished the book, you'll know exactly what I'm talking about.

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  • Ghassan_
    Ghassan_3mth
    Replied to Scarlettheartt

    Not really. The second part of Roy and Rex's love life is going to be a series that won't be short. Season 1,2 and 3 will be long and more of action.

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  • Ghassan_
    Ghassan_3mth
    Replied to SnowPenguin

    Yeah... I noticed when going through my book. This is much more enjoyable than the other. Thanks for the review

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  • Ghassan_
    Ghassan_3mth
    Replied to Sigheti

    Wow! this is a good and very honest review. I wish I could get this in novels. If you don't mind me asking, what could be the reason people read books, add to their library yet, do not comment? Have you ever done that? and if so, why?

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    Endbringer
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  • Ghassan_
    Ghassan_3mth
    Posted

    I will give a 4.8 as rate to this book because, at a certain point, there was a repetition of words that became tiring but apart from that, I recommend it and will definitely share it on my Facebook page. I love the ideas crafted within and every other aspect of it concerning the Authors world and he helped us get the inside of his book by describing his character's emotions and every other thing brilliantly. Keep it up Author and good job

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  • Ghassan_
    Ghassan_3mth
    Replied to Drakonous

    Your right. But I feel Grammarly exaggerates as well and their premium is so expensive that one can't consider though it is very good and I do recommend it. Yet, they should try understanding that youths are out there who write and they need to reduce their amount and reconsider because we aren't into regular business to pay throughout

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: A world where magic exists
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  • Ghassan_
    Ghassan_3mth
    Commented

    I laughed nearly throughout all paragraphs. Thanks for this book.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: A world where magic exists
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