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I'm sure it took a lot of effort to research this hollow, and you Author-san were able to make this story very interesting, I really admire how you made the interactions between the characters. I highly recommend this 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

I think it's very fitting to increase the strength of the team, in the original TOG story I could feel how frustrated Khun and Rak were because they were so weak in front of the subordinates of the head of the family, Moreover, the other members are not really highlighted in canon.

Thank you for the translation, to the Author, I really enjoyed Viserys' journey from your story, there is a certain satisfaction when seeing the Targaryen fate in this fanfic.

I think I understand how you feel Author-san, when I wrote my first fanfic I also had the same feeling, I imagined in my head that the story I made would be very fun and It's stressful, I've prepared a lot of plots for my fanfic, but when I put them into writing, for some reason I can't enjoy it anymore. And I can only enjoy it in my imagination 🤣🤣

Is there a bonus chapter Author?????? I want to read team khun's reaction to seeing Charlotte 🤣🤣🤣

Hey somehow I feel like all of Acier personalities make a lot of sense, considering how possessive Noele to Asta 🤣🤣🤣

Calm down Author-san, somehow I can feel your feelings when writing this chapter 🤣🤣

Are you using free Ai? In the early chapters I could still feel the atmosphere of each chapter, but the later chapters the grammar is getting messier.

I'm also a beginner fanfic writer, to be honest, creating conversations between characters is the hardest part for me, because what's in my head and when it's realized as writing is very complicated.