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ObsidianMind3yrReplied to Arianna_Oddyno I was trying to @ someone but I guess it doesn't work
Below the biting agony there was a surge of excitement. A simple happiness bloomed that King Yanlin clung onto. It was all he had left.- ObsidianMind3yrCommentedCh 1 The Demon King, betrayed
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Below the biting agony there was a surge of excitement. A simple happiness bloomed that King Yanlin clung onto. It was all he had left. - ObsidianMind3yrCommented
Yea basically. The immortal of a thousand blossoms would have actually Killed the king in this version I feel, since he wouldn't be like this. (personality wise)
Below the biting agony there was a surge of excitement. A simple happiness bloomed that King Yanlin clung onto. It was all he had left. - ObsidianMind3yrCommented
How about I take him for myself instead of you, hmm?
The Immortal of a Thousand Blossoms was tall in stature and had phoenix eyes with fanning lashes. No one would mistake him for a woman, for he was built strong with wide shoulders and lean muscles. His jawline was sharp and his fingers long and slender. But it wouldn't be wrong to call him beautiful either. The sole mar on his features would be the one mole that dotted the left corner of his lips. Though, this mole was probably King Yanlin's favorite feature on this immortal's face. - ObsidianMind3yrCommentedMany have said that the sole striking feature of the Immortal of a Thousand Blossoms was his appearance.
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That would be your hubby my dear
Was it because they were demons? Yu Yanlin was tired and didn't feel like dwelling on it too much. He was already at the end of his line with no one remaining at his side. The only emotion he allowed to bubble past the pain was curiosity toward his would-be killer. - ObsidianMind3yrCommented
oof
Demon King Yanlin had been betrayed. - ObsidianMind3yrCommentedCh 5 New Devil In Town -1
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It's like a video game!
'Hm, that's weird a quest?' I thought to myself. "Yes." I said accepting the quest. - ObsidianMind3yrCommented
Period cramps be like...
I woke with a serious headache. My head pounded as sweat trickled down and landed on my brow. "Ah!" I exclaimed as a searing pain erupted from my chest. It felt like a hot poker was stabbing me over and over. I clutched my heart as the pain got worse. This lasted for nearly 20 minutes before it finally faded. - ObsidianMind3yrCommentedCh 4 The Greatest Mistake -3
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One of a kind this kid that's for sure.
My mind suddenly cleared but I still couldn't move. "Why?" That was the only thing that seemed to come out of my mouth at that moment. - ObsidianMind3yrCommented
They are probably of the lower classes/peasants so they cant really afford to learn/ get education.
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Wow, if all I had to do to marry a king was try running from them and then dancing with them, then sign me up! But of course not this one, he's... too aggressive :/
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I just wanna say that I love this story so far! I know one measly comment isn't much, but I hope I can get you to write another chapter! Here is some advice for when you feel too little people are reading this: Imagine whatever amount of people that have read this... Now picture them all in front of you. You'll realize that each and every one of those people read, and maybe even liked your work. I myself have always wanted to write something, or even just leave something behind for people to cherish. And now I'm doing just that! I love your writing it is very detailed, and I can really imagine each scene vividly. Although you might want to work on your punctuation. Thank you. I sincerely hope you keep writing! This is awesome!
Ch 3 The city of blood