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I really like this novel, it is fast paced and full of jammed-packed-action...its just, its too fast-paced that some datails are forgotten and just go on with the story and some interactions are too stiff. But overall your story is very excellent.[img=recommend][img=recommend] (to the author) PS. I hope your story get even more better.
will that's a revise