Knytblade

Despite it's formidable potential, this book fails miserably in keeping it all together. The entire plot can be defined as Murphy's Law at every turn. Whatever can go wrong, will go wrong and at the worst possible moments, throughout the story. The amount of logical fallacies are through the roof.

Better change the title of the story to "Murphy's Law". Everything that can go wrong, will go wrong.

Use your bloody skills till they level up into Runes. What's so hard to understand about that?

Your comment shows exactly how dumb you are. There are methods to create tension in the story without making dumb decisions. Character development is when a character develops organically to his surroundings and situations as per the development of the story. Whimsically changing the character without rhyme or reason and making uncharacteristic decisions is just haphazard work, which is exactly what is happening here. The only thing that's consistent about the MC is how inconsistent, he is.

He doesn't have the perception rune, yet.

He said, "I won't." It could also mean that he wouldn't promise. 😉

It's too soon to be constantly switching POVs.

Achilles Tendon, you mean? I mean Achilles heel is literally, well, Achilles' heel. Achilles was invulnerable except for his heels, which were his sole weakness. He was killed by an arrow to his heels. Achilles Tendon was named after that and that is common to all humans.

She's not a Magus, yet and her bloodline rank is nowhere near Lucian's. Which means she's vulnerable to Lucian's commands just like Emery was when he couldn't save Xion.

This was completely unnecessary.