Daoist266256

Essences are like powers in bottels. Aıthors use them commenly as sources of power in a lot of stories. You can probably find description's of them on reddit.

Euron is Balon's brother, not his son. Except that thanks for the chapter.

Option 1 is the best

Ancalagon

If its not a AU World with increased power levels. (Does Webnovel has a edit button, couldnt find it.)

Finn and Riveria are only Level 6. Only Level 7 in orario is Ottar.

Did Selyse saw Jon from Dragonwolf?

This just became one of my favorites. Story was always good but the ending of first arc just made it amazing. It is like i paid an author money to make a fanfiction. It has one of my favorite genres 'Gamer' but also 'World Hopping' and also managed to make both work. Most Gamer stories make main characters to op to even enjoy the story and most World Hopping ones changes the setting like author changes clothes. This here managed to both make gamer in that specific flavor that is extremely good to read and also managed to make the setting feel like mc really lived in there. My only complain is upload frequency. 'I want moar' in caveman language. I wish author good luck in future and just wanted to say this is a good fanfiction.

I like the story but i feel like Fortuna was not inculuded in a good way. Feels like all she has is a half developed cardboard personality and 1-liners that you can see in any Danmachi stories with some grammer. I also dont understand why you choose to even include her to the story. He could have gone to a diffrent familia of a newly desended god/goddess in orario and with it you could have incopareted some world development to the story.

I just noticed i wrote something similar just with how i thought it works in a bit more detail