Excellent story line and exceptional usage of language to allow the readers a taste of how the emotions of the character's are the forefront cause of direction that is taken for every situation they encounter. The background hasn't been touched upon in depth, since many variables are missing the ability to be introduced into its so as to also produce numerous more 'paths' to which could be detoured through or precipitate a larger scale event which would hold many valuable portions for the characters and even those that they interact with.

Excellent use of stimulating with a very intense and well worded combat scenario draws the reader into the scene, distorting the perception and allowing them to be drawn into the chapter and greatly enjoy the flow of the chapter.