The writing structure is enjoyable, and the narration is written as if the character is speaking to you. Interesting concept. [img=recommend]

Why is it called Hogo-sha?

Thank you for your review. It wasn't my intention to write a funny character, but I guess that's the side-effect of writing a petty main character. [img=recommend]

There's a lot of effort placed into the worldbuilding and action of the story, but word structure requires editing. It's an enjoyable sci-fi, nonetheless. The dialogue can get confusing, but so long as it gets polished, it will be great.

I like the combat so far, and although monster stories are not my forte, I can see some potential. Keep it up! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Pretty alright. Needs to use less caps, however. War is at hand, though. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]