Khairon

love it the first version was ok but way to fast paced op for me but this is perfect keep up the good work

+1

need less ai more your own writing

I to want to read more chapters. Of your story that we have been waiting over a year for more of plz update atleast a couple chapters its way to good of a story to just abandon.

write some chapters plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

I hate this whenever there is a good story thats great to read and actually has good grammer the author gives up

are you going to get one possibly in the future

whats the name of your books on amazon ive tried to find you but cant

love it top 5 best got fanfics iver read so far i cant wait for more

you need to start adding chapters actual chapters not just sentances begging for stones if you want power stones write a dang chapter that deserves them youve written like 10 actual chapters for 41 chapters on this story and its sucks it actually makes me not want to give power stones and stop putting ads for your patrion that say you have 30 chapters for this story there are no other chapters there for it