Fox_king_1789

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finally Bro I am gonna 😢 cry because of happiness 😊

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honestly I love the whole book but I noticed two points and wanted to let the author know of some suggestions. 1) instead of refusing chakra he can use chakra methods to train his mental and physical abilities that alone was good. 2) He refused the dark magic book for fear of Dumbledore and said he will stay out of trouble but when he is slowly getting mixed in with Neville he will be in sight so. maybe he should be a little maybe bold or more cautious iIdon't know. also as they say don't kick the gift horse in the face ANYWAY I LOVE THIS BOOK SO NO MATTER THE PLOT DEVELOPMENT I ENJOY READING IT BUT SOMETIMES THERE IS SOME DESIRE LIKE MAYBE THIS SHOULD BE LIKE THIS THAT'S ALL. I LOVE IT SO FAR AND HOPE IT CLIMBS TO THE TOP RANKINGS.

no chapters missing also please do as you think is better for the plot because so far it is wonderful 👍 I had once suggested DXD for extra peerage but when I saw what he wished for from Genie that was wonderful so I think whatever your development will be it will be awesome 😎

please tell me if the last part of chapter was just my imagination because binge reading the whole book in a day. May ONE ABOVE ALL bless you so that you have happiness and good news from now on.

THANKS FOR THE GREAT 👍 CHAPTER

YES THAT'S THE GOOD 👍 STUFF I THINK MAYBE LATER HE CAN CONTRACT DXD WORLD AND MAYBE DUE TO SIMILAR TRAITS INCREASE HIS CHESS PIECES

maybe save the pieces for other worlds and just get tier for now anyway because the world will be in stasis untill he goes there later and can connect with other girls through blessings or something. BUT THAT JUST A SUGGESTION. I LOVE THIS BOOK SO I DON'T MIND ANY PLOT DEVELOPMENT. THANKS 👍 FOR THE GREAT 😃 WORK

I have wish for maybe the Author selecting alfia from Danmachi