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Prepare for the skeleton war.
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for anyone else that was confused by this. Xiao seems to translate to small while ping translates to level or even (synonyms for flat).
how big would a whale get from gigantism if other animals are getting that big?
the first nyx is misspelled
four not three
you forgot the 0 in 10
his charm also didn't increase
you didn't add any enchantments
I normally don't put in the effort to write a review but this story definitely deserves it. It is obvious a lot of effort is put into this story and the quality is better than the vast majority of things I read. The development of the world and characters is entertaining, well paced, and important to the plot. While they don't update "often" they update regularly and more than reasonably quickly for the massive size of chapters which makes it more than worth the wait. They take into account things most people probably wouldn't think about until it comes up well in advance and puts things in place to make things make sense and prevent plot holes that I probably wouldn't have even noticed if they didn't mention them. Absolutely amazing story.
I really hope you don't change your writing just because of the idiots who are the reason reading comprehension is taught in school. your writing is really good and I enjoy it like it is. some people are just dumb or overly sensitive even if it has nothing to do with them.
in my opinion this is one if the best of this kind of book I've read. The writing quality makes it easy to read and understand what is going on, while it is still early in the story it is obvious that the development of it is already going to be amazing, the character is well designed, they update very often, and the world background while not a ton of it has been done yet since the mc hasn't been able to learn much about it in the story already has done obvious development of what kind of world it will be.
to be fair if he farmed the toxic saliva attribute it could be very helpful.
include should be included