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  • Swetha_V
    Swetha_V1yr
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    mantra would have been a better fit.

    So, this is our female lead's law.
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  • Swetha_V
    Swetha_V1yr
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    Nice first interfacing between the protagonists, but both being too polite is kind of putting off. should make some blunders to remove the awkward atmosphere.

    Ch 2 Receiving a call from the CEO of Liu Group, "Liu Longwei".
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  • Swetha_V
    Swetha_V1yr
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    It not "taught or thought", adviced to be - "was told it would be okay for me to call"

    "Ok, I called to talk a little with you as we are going to collect our marriage certificate tomorrow even though we don't know each other well enough to get married and this is also our first time speaking with each other, I still taught it was right for me to call. Is that OK with you Miss Chen Lihua?"
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  • Swetha_V
    Swetha_V1yr
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    *"I'm Chen Lihua" or "This is Chen Lihua on the line" would have been better.

    She accepts the call and hears a deep male voice over the line and it is exactly her type. "Hello am Liu Longwei, am I speaking with Miss Chen Lihua?". "yes, am Chen Lihua" Chen Lihua answers with her natural melodic voice.
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  • Swetha_V
    Swetha_V1yr
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    quite the heck of a mother, she is. But, its kind of adorable.

    After pondering over the little matter for a while, she shakes her head in denial before going back to her room to continue her chat with her friends.
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  • Swetha_V
    Swetha_V1yr
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    smiling 'like a fool' or 'smitten' or 'wickedly like having tricked someone'. Which do you prefer?

    Lihua removes her mother's hands from her cheeks while replying "Lady Chen why do I feel like you admire him more than you admire me?. You reed to see your face, you have been smiling since you started talking about this marriage".
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