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your story has a premise and the ideas are really cool, but it doesn't work for me anymore. for arthur mia is placed on such a high pedestal and is never in the slightest wrong (and I like mia's character) and I just don't see reciprocity, with these events in the last chapters despite certain facts pointing against arthur, he explained/insinuated a little the situation is very different, besides after everything they went through and like mia claiming he would do anything for arthur and trusts him a lot, but a simple doubt by a third party can throw their relationship into chaos and make it release important secrets with extreme ease (I don't even want to think about what will happen from now on, where they've come after the two), and I'm not even going to talk about varner and the brothel owner who on the floor of the situation will pass as nothing had happened or harmed. Good luck with your story, I liked it so far.
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