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WritingFailure7mthCommentedIf he made a gun into a memory and put some like force strengthening, or something enchantments, just sayin
Sunny worked around that limitation, somewhat, by turning mundane things into Memories and experimenting on them instead. However, that produced its own obstacle — he needed soul shards to do so, and soul shards were very expensive in the real world.- WritingFailure7mthCommented
I’m guessing they lied that their perfect
And reveal their lie - WritingFailure11mthCommented
... effie
"...What now, you old hags? More training? Ah, and here I was just starting to enjoy my daily punishment!" - WritingFailure11mthCommented
sorcery teacher :)
"Come, come. It is rude to refuse a sincere invitation… especially one coming from such a nice person as me. Oh… where are my manners? I didn't even introduce myself! Rejoice, stranger... you are in the brilliant presence of Noctis, the great Sorcerer of the East… - WritingFailure11mthCommented
author o author, please tell me this is the shadow of our dearly departed echo, I WANT MY CRAB THING BACK Q-Q
And then, another shadow moved slightly, clicking its chitinous claws. One of the carapace scavengers took a small step forward. - WritingFailure11mthCommented
skrew you and your good puns
…In the end, it all came down to a question of blind trust. - WritingFailure11mthCommented
sounds like a perfect chance for a shadow chance breakthrough
For a fighter, their body was like a well-oiled machine that they knew in and out. They knew every detail about it, how it moved, how it performed in any given situation, what it could accomplish and what was beyond its ability. All battle techniques were finely tuned for that precise machine… changing its parameters was like throwing a wrench into the mechanism, potentially causing its collapse. - WritingFailure11mthCommented
ok at least there's a little nibble of balance
However, Sunny quickly realized the limitations of this seemingly breathtaking enchantment. Unlike [Chains of Longing] and [Radiant Will], [Undying] was an active one. And he was willing to bet that sustaining it required an ocean of souls essence. - WritingFailure11mthCommented
I'll admit, I'm annoyed at the convenience, i believe that the story and world lore at least make up for it a bit, if this novel was more fight heavy and focused less on the characters i doubt I'd be as forgiving
[Chains of Longing] Enchantments Description: "This armor provides the wearer with high protection against mind attacks." - WritingFailure11mthCommented
I'm guessing his fate played a role in bringing him to a shadow "weapon" and just so happened to receive an echo of the "weapon"
[Mark of Death] Attribute Description: "You bear a mark of Death, as just like Death, you were created to be a weapon." - WritingFailure11mthCommented
NOOOOOOOOO, THE LOOOOOORE
[Your Memory has been destroyed.] - WritingFailure11mthReplied to GiaSilver
EXACTLY
Apparently, there were… collectors among the wealthy mundane humans who were very interested in this sort of thing. Some superstitious Awakened also believed, for some reason, that absorbing "bad" shards would be detrimental to the purity of their souls. - WritingFailure11mthReplied to Sneak_Freak
she helped John darksoul look for the dark soul
Her hair was longer, and there was a strange silver half-mask covering her eyes, its surface blind and intricately engraved. It matched the polished steel of the armor she was wearing on top of a midnight blue coat, comprised of a short cuirass, vambraces, greaves, and a segmented pauldron. - WritingFailure11mthCommented
thundered? not whispered?
The voice of the Spell suddenly thundered in the solemn dark hall, interrupting his thoughts. - WritingFailure11mthCommented
both? maybe split?
Which tower was really the replica, and which one was the original? - WritingFailure11mthReplied to NobleQueenBee
maybe it's a situation like the mask?
Sunny was left very confused by that turn of events. He was certain that there was nowhere on the Twisted Rock that he had failed to search. And yet, there was nothing on the island to cause his intuition to react so strongly. What was going on? Had he failed to notice something, or was he mistaken about the whole thing, to begin with? - WritingFailure11mthCommented
good outlook
…That didn't mean there were none, though. It just meant that they were better at hiding than he was at looking. - WritingFailure11mthCommented
ship on the coin, worm thing that eats metal found dead with coins in stomach, the chain is erroding on the island with a ship, I'd say he hit a jackpot of info
"No need. The only failing chain on the Isles is far away from the Sanctuary, connecting Shipwreck Island to the Twisted Rock. This is where the Chain Worm came from. I just saw it myself." - WritingFailure11mthCommented
best written phone call ong
"Everything is ready? Wonderful. So, when can I… oh, really? Well… great! Then I will… be there at noon? Right. See you later, then." - WritingFailure1yrReplied to Syclus
It never just makes thngs unfair, theres always a chance, the spell do as the spell do
"Who said it was a coincidence? People often tend to forget that the Spell has a mind of its own. It sees all and hears all. And it really loves to play with fate. If there was someone among those hundreds of people tasked with killing me, the chances of me having a fateful encounter with them in the Dream Realm would be all but guaranteed. That is how the Spell always does things."