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Daoist2164061yrReplied to LastearI didn't even read the deal this way I thought he was only allowed to take up to 10% of the whole not keep ten percent of what he did take
The harvest that they could gain from that would be disappointing. While the tail bone was still incredibly large and massive, it was only enough to build a handful of bone mechs and no more after the MTA took away its 90 percent share.- Daoist2164062yrReplied to Daoist216406
or had one of the tenses needs to be changed
This paragraph has been deleted. - Daoist2164062yrCommented
number seems wrong. isn't one of their mech worth 200-400m so that would only be a few mechs. probably meant 1t
Ves waved his hand. "You can discuss the exact figure among yourselves. I don't want any half-measures though. If we have to pay as much as 1 billion hex credits or more in order to receive the best form of protection, then just do it. With all of the publicity that we've gained from showing off our combat prowess, we can't rule out that someone interested in our mechs or methods is planning to do something to us. If we can travel together with an entire mercenary mech division, I would feel a lot safer!" - Daoist2164062yrReplied to Fauna_sapling
not everyone has to orient the same way just flip upside down and it won't matter how tall your target is
Of course, the Avatar and Crosser mechs tried to lower themselves in order to fight against the dwarven mechs on an equal basis, but this only prompted the Molten Hammer mechs to do the same. - Daoist2164062yrCommented
is this thought rather than speech?
"According to this chart… none of my leading subordinates who currently answer to me are directly connected to me anymore. Instead, they all have to go through this so-called 'vice patriarch', who Shederin happened to nominate his son to assume this powerful position." - Daoist2164062yrCommented
remove the Im from improper or the not. it can't have both
This paragraph has been deleted. - Daoist2164062yrReplied to Daniel_Merriken
that's the only way the economics could work otherwise someone will only need to sell Breakevenvolume = licencecost/.94/50m to be able to start undercutting then the degree of undercut increases the volume needed so unless the license cost is huge it won't work and at a minimum the Friday coalition and other interested parties will need to buy a copy so the FC will have no incentive not to crash the market price to hurt ves
Ch 3047 Treatment Editions - Daoist2164062yrCommented
did Juliet or ves say this?
"Doesn't Master Willix have a lot of merits?" - Daoist2164062yrCommented
selling the praying version of the sanctuary for an overpriced amount won't work if anyone else is able to buy a design licensed then undercut dramatically unless you can disallow license sales then only allow direct or agreed sales to keep prices high or if the MTA set the license cost very high which would feel a bit cheaty
Ch 2972 Picking Ingredients - Daoist2164062yrCommented
the latter is the second one which would have the opposite meaning intended, should be former instead or the subject needs to be switched in the sentence structure
From the moment she said those words, she felt that everything was right in the cosmos. For a long time, she tried to be good at both in equal measures. It was only after she began to focus more on the latter that she recognized that this was her true calling. - Daoist2164063yrCommented
It's impossible to tell when he's thinking something, talking to himself or speaking to others and these two paragraphs really don't help. a simple "thought ves" or "said ves" or switching from " to ' would make a huge difference
His outburst surprised Ketis for a moment, but as soon as she realized that he was having another epiphany, she dutifully kept quiet. - Daoist2164063yrCommented
unsure whether this is supposed to be proscribed or prescribed
Ves was one of the people who had stepped onto one of the paths proscribed by the MTA. Within the clan, several expert candidates had also developed their spiritual potential by merging their willpower with their ability to pilot mechs.