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So he can use shikai now?
All that could be avoided if the protagonist stops hiding his power just say Iām a mf cultivator and immortal. Then Alice will stop worrying about turning him into a vampireš
I mean he lived a whole life in a murim world, became stronger than everyone, got dic slapped to another world by a protagonist, but he doesnāt have that heavenly demon rizz. Just a regular guy not affected by decades of danger and betrayal he even died a couple times(immortal apparently). No faceslapping yet. Might as well have made him go to a regular fantasy world where all the beta Mcās go. Has good potential, but potential means nothing when itās not utilized. Anyways Iāll keep reading mabye it gets better š
That scared me a little thank god humanoid form šš
The grammar is decent, which is the downside of most fanfics on this app. What I did notice in this story was the lack of character interactions, and when they did interact it came out forced, it even made me cringe sometimes. The concept is good, the story is pretty fast pace as of chapter 16(where I left off). Hopefully it is improved, Iāll probably come back again after trying out other fanfics on my list. Overall not a bad read if you have arenāt prone to second hand embarrassment like me from all the edgy and cringy moments.
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Mabye Lucifer was just as talented or even more, but god was limiting his potential? But no one was left to monitor the devils potential after Lucifer and god died.
Best one in a while, the author stories keep me coming back and re reading his stories. Iāve re read his Otaku cultivator one at least five time and I am currently reading it again. His early works had a pretty large amount of grammar mistakes but you can tell the author has improved over the years. Anyways thank you for the interesting stories.
Ah, yes the Rifan I know is still there.
Naruto looks more feminine than his father, so not exactly as handsomeš¤