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Great story I hope you will continue to write more until it is complete and thanks for the interesting chapters so far.👍❤️[img=recommend][img=update]
The story is really good, you just need to improve the accuracy of the plots and do not bother with negative reviews since most of them are about the first chapters without going deeper into the story in general, I advise you to continue and improve.👍❤️❤️
An advice for you would be better if you reduce the description of the characters too much, as it is annoying. Well, this is my opinion, I do not know about others, but for me, this is my problem with your stories and I hope that it will continue, and also please update the story of One Piece.
Sorry, I didn't really translate, but only transferred, nothing more
Sorry, I didn't really translate, but only transferred, nothing more
Brother, I never said I was the translator, but I said I'm just translating the novel. You can read that in the description of the Pirate Achievement System novel.
Good job so far keep it up but you need to improve your grammar a bit more and that would be better Thank you for this great novel. 😍🤩 Also you need to publish more chapters here at least two chapters every day or every few days. 😍🤩
Thank you and for sure I will try to improve the grammar as much as I can :)
thank you brother :)