CosmicGrim

Damn, I get that we need a third rate villain at the start but did the brother have to be so shitty? Reminds me of Damn reincarnation when there was a whole arc shitting on the second brother for basically no reason lmao

Does she have Congenital lobar Emphysema?

Interesting and unique plot. Had me sucked in initially and the writing quality is actually good. The pacing is pretty bad though, and personally I find it just a tad cringe how quickly everyone fell in love, and the constant jabs at the mc of the original game when tbh idk if they’re that different.

The story has an interesting premise but the writing quality kills it for me. Author does a lot of “telling” rather than “showing” which becomes hard to read when the MC or side characters are opining about how lonely he is or how much he sacrificed. It wasn’t executed well imo and made me cringe.

Ngl, I feel like you could come up with more creative ways of making him an asshole besides calling people a bitch over and over

It’s chapter 2 and I’m already tired of him acting like an asshole… the plot seems interesting and my guess is his relationships with the heroines will improve but idk how long I can stomach him being a dick. And if it’s super prolonged I’ll probably just drop because it’s the trope I hate the most besides the MC hiding his identity or skill the entire novel

Is the author gonna explain why this guy randomly knows rituals?

Going from zombie apocalypse to transmigration is a new one

Great board game

A day took 51 chapters