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    my opinion is🤔.the MC is smart(Even thought he doing something Dumb sometimes).logical(not logical enough their sometime his emotion cloud his judgement),now he still a goodguy(🤮 sorry my heart hurt when i type good guy i really hate it). author tell US that on the late chapter the MC Will become a antihero(😁 this is good because the requirement to be the best anti Hero is first really selfish so no sacrife for love one Bu**t, really smart do not let emotion cloud is ability to think logicaly and do not doing something Dumb like a wannabe shonen MC who only a live because the mighty plot armor 🤨,that is the requirement for anti Hero but if author say some b***t that this is not and then make the MC stay as good guy then author is a lying coward🤣🤣(don't be angry author but this is truth) but overall good fanfic author i hope you succes.and author DON'T BE A LIAR👍👍👍🤣👌🙏

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    "No, I killed you!" Oki tries to correct Melo.
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  • Adrian_Putra_3580
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    So the MC Will bring Amy to the next world?what the *ck.sorry can anyone tell me what the use of that.sorry maybe i little cold but why should you bought them a.k.a dead weight 🤔.what the use of Amy she weak she do not have any ability(probably can be his weakness just kidnap her put some trap boom MC died)sorry if this harsh but it the truth.and when i think the MC logical and smart he become Shounen MC 😤 think with is d**k. Sorry if this harsh but this is my opinion i cannot think the use of bringing Amy except she get some Bulls**t power(😀) that can help the MC. But good job author this is just opinion who use brain🤔😅🤣.i hope you succes

    Ch 47 Chapter 47
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    The Unbound (Multiverse: The Walking Dead, Game of Thrones?)
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  • Adrian_Putra_3580
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    This is my opinion don't be angry. I like the story at first because i like the MC characteristic 1.emontieles(good Because his emotion cant block him for using logic) 2.preety smart(can use his ability for his adventege) 3.neutral(it what i think at first 😀) But when the story progress MC is how i said it BECOME DUMB like a wanabe shonen MC. 1.he let his emotion block his ability to think logicaly😤(so expect something that shonen mc Will do doing dumb s*it that can make them dead if not because the mighty plot armor.i don't why the MC doing something like this event thought he know that it Will make him Dead) 2.from always doing something with his brain to braindead🤮 3.mc become a good guy(event thought not a wanabe Hero but close enough. So don't expect something smart and ruthless like yami(ho*y Joker)if you a fan of anti Hero smart MC. I don't tell you to not read it you can read it if you like it,this is just my opinion i like neutral/evil smart MC who Will not die very fast id not because the help of the mighty plot armor. 👌👌👌👌👌🙏👍

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  • Adrian_Putra_3580
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    Thanks author.but why i have i feeling Hinata(dead weight) Will go with him to other world🤔.it just a felling (5%).i really hope the MC not become Shounen MC who care about other and not selfish (🤮😑).ok author please don't chage is personalty i don't mind of it just a act for his benifit(but if he only doing for emotional porpouse i Will be really disappointed🤔🙄) But overall good chapter author.this is just an opinion 👌👌

    Ch 98 Years to Build, A Moment To Destroy.
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  • Adrian_Putra_3580
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    Thank you author i hope the MC still the same and only care about his own benefit and not because anime stupid shonen Hero MC👍👍. So author don't be a simp👌🙌

    Ch 29 Annihilation: The Prologue (6)
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  • Adrian_Putra_3580
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    Please author do not make romance the main attetion.it ruin good rational MC👍

    Ch 70 Benefits
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    Lord of Fire is a Gamer
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  • Adrian_Putra_3580
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    Good MC think logical (i don't know in the future some author make MC from a logical person to a simp when they added female lead🤨)its good story' and from what i read this Will be multiverse travel i hope its good(what i hate with multiverse travel is when they take other people because she is preety and do not have anything useful if i am the mc the only thing i Will take is my pet at least they useful 😅🤔) and i hope their Will be serious situation and not only comedy and i hope the MC only traveling alone it more exciting then bringing trash. This is just my opinion good job author👍👍👍

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  • Adrian_Putra_3580
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    So author this is a world travel fanfic right?so when he travel Will he bring anyone i hope not because i cannot think the use of bringing people that have no use because the only one Will get stronger is the MC because he have the system' so if he bring Amy she Will only be dead weight (are i am to coldbloded to think like this🤔)maybe because when i read the MC doing something that i think stupid/based on E-motion i get angry(because when do something like this they do not think of the backlash its like they think they are a main character in a story,that 100% true but we the reader imagining it in our head that this is a real thing and not a story sorry if i sound to picky😅). But this is a good fanfic author keep going👍👍 this is just my opinion

    Ch 66 Chapter 66
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    Good.i hope the MC stay logical it the only way to get stronger if he only used his E-motion to get stronger that only work on dumb stupid power of friendship anime MC🤮🤮. Good job author 👍👍

    Ch 29 29: Instant Confrontation
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    Ohhhh when i see the genius tag i thought this Will be a anti Hero MC because only anti Hero MC that Will survive because they think with their brain not emotion.from reading this i am sure he Will be a anime Hero mc(i hate Hero MC because when i think about their action all are stupid)🤮😂 But good job author this is just opinion 🙏🤔

    Ch 5 The Expressionless Maid
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  • Adrian_Putra_3580
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    Thanks for the chapter author.i like this MC who think for only his benefit it Mean he a smart and logical MC(i love it i hope he stay like this) and not became stupid anime MC and sacrife himself for other(sacrife is for Losser.

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    Thanks.but saving other people mehhh

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  • Adrian_Putra_3580
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    Thanks author.i hope the MC stay neutral like he said only doing Hero thing because its benefit him and not because he care about all of people live like a Losser (wanabe Hero who sacrefive himself)and if he became a real hero(he Will be a stupid cringe anime Hero mc and you need to give him amazing plot armor).i said this because he feel hurt when the civilan critic's him(its a weakness that Hero MC have they don't think logical and act on their E-motion)🤮 Just an opinion 🙏

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    Thanks author just an opinion 👍

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  • Adrian_Putra_3580
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    So the MC not cautios or manipulative not doing something for only his benefit (something that typical Hero anime MC have )good guy (not neutral or evil)he is a hero(probely Will sacrife himself for his loved one,care about other people opinion,have amazing plot armor.)not my cup of a tea i like to read something that logical and a hero Will probely die if not because plot armor(because they care about other people and risking their live example just cacth the people that Hero care about and threathen him to kill hisself)it just my opinion don't get angry author. But good job author i love the idea but not the character.

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  • Adrian_Putra_3580
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    Thanks author i hope he Will not get attached like he said and if he get attached than he a stupid simp😤👍.just my opinion

    Ch 21 Chapter 20: Be a guard.
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  • Adrian_Putra_3580
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    Thanks author i hope he Will always be this smart have a attachment is a weakness😤 if he have that he Will make sacrife for is girl(sacrife is for Losser) live before sex👍.

    Ch 20 Chapter 19: Bank account.
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