darkchocolate59
Float like a butterfly, sting like a bee, cause ain't nobody got time for that negativity.
of reading
47
Read books
Badges
5Moments
101
darkchocolate596mthCommentedHow has no one commented on how weird it is that he's implying he wants to escape?! Is he also pretending?!
He was unable to believe that Han Xiao could have escaped alone, not when it was impossible for himself.- darkchocolate593yrCommented
Haha! I knew it! Our new MC is neither girl, but a mix
It might be due to Feng Qing Ge's memories melding with hers but when the memory of being disfigured surfaced in her mind, she could feel the same feelings Feng Qing Ge had felt then, almost just like she had been the one who had actually suffered under that knife. - darkchocolate593yrCommented
Won't assimilating memories influence Feng Jiu? Having 2 sets of memories will make the MC neither Feng Jiu or Feng Gui, but a mix of both!
The fair and snowy slender fingers tapped on the table softly. The light gentle tapping made Feng Qing Ge nervous. She had no way of knowing what Feng Jiu was thinking and left with no other choice, she feared hearing rejection coming out from Feng Jiu's mouth, so she went on to say: "I will leave all my memories to you to allow you to know everything that has happened. Feng Jiu, you must help me, you must help me….." - darkchocolate593yrCommented
I like this set-up where the old personality is like a vengeful spirit. Will she disappeare soon or only after her revenge is fulfilled?
Her voice had thick hatred wrapped around it. At that point, she already accepted that she wouldn't be able to recover anything for herself and hence all she yearned for at that moment was to make the person responsible for putting her into that abominable state, that Su Ruo Yun, to live out her life in endless suffering! - darkchocolate593yrCommented
Perhaps not the real Refrinz but a spectre/illusion. The title of the location had 'truth' plus a possible invisibility barrier and the '?' symbology -> lots of mystery and hidden meanings!
This paragraph has been deleted. - darkchocolate593yrCommented
such a good friend!
This paragraph has been deleted. - darkchocolate593yrCommented
Is this seriously his best friend? Our MC must have low EQ, totally oblivious to his friend's care and concern.
This paragraph has been deleted. - darkchocolate593yrCommented
why not make enough for leftovers??? that way he can eat 'real food' any time he wants.
This paragraph has been deleted. - darkchocolate593yrCommented
This guy seems kinda obsessive so I wonder if his competitive spirit and seeing the MC as a rival will make him change classes when the MC does...
This paragraph has been deleted. - darkchocolate593yrCommented
and he'd totally be carrying this around on a normal day....
This chapter has been deleted. - darkchocolate593yrReplied to crouchingTiger
I agree but I suspect he is driven by Sirius' memories and simply wants to see Harry, who he only knows will be at Hogwarts.
This chapter has been deleted. - darkchocolate593yrCommented
Wonderful! I'm re-reading this now that there are a bunch of new chapters and I'm really impressed by the creativity this time. Thanks for the story!
This chapter has been deleted. - darkchocolate593yrCommented
Wait! The MC (from summary) is also Yan! Zemin Yan. Maybe MC changes his name? Or maybe he not actually part of the Song family. Villagers could have just assumed.
A few minutes later a very thin boy came out of the hut. Though, now he was very clean, with long brown hair that was still wet and soft brown eyes. This clean little boy is clearly Brother Yan, or as it is known in the village, Song Yan. Song Yan was not handsome, having a rather ordinary face. Only that his eyes had a very soft and warm glow, which created a sense of closeness and protectiveness in people. - darkchocolate593yrCommented
Interesting but idk. I'm a little frustrated with the world building since there are a lot of discrepancies and plot holes (like how can there be empires without smaller countries? What role do the sects play in the world? Just to produce 'heroes'?). Also I'm confused about this Song character since the MC's name in the summary is different but... Yeah, idk. I'm gonna keep reading because it has potential but I'm confused right now.
Ch 1 The Coming of the Sects and the Tragedy of Song Family - darkchocolate593yrCommented
There's definitely something fishy about the assassination attempt and I wonder if Charlotte is actually right? MC doesn't actually know anything about his past spoiled self, just heresay and if the suicide was false what else might be?
Ch 17 012. Imperial Prince is Toiling Away -1 (Part One) - darkchocolate593yrCommented
so illogical... this MC is annoyingly dense
Please, please! Someone else help me out here! This girl, she might suddenly stab me in the stomach with the knife you know?! - darkchocolate593yrCommented
3 months? Same as the girl...
What kind of nonsense was this? I couldn't be sure of whether this was a reincarnation or possession, but here I was, already hell-bound only after three months of living in this place. - darkchocolate593yrCommented
ooh definitely a necromancer... or an evolved leader zombie?
Actually, it wasn't so much as having 'located it quickly', but more like 'lured' to this place, or so I thought. These zombie assholes were smart as hell, so they must've deliberately left all these breadcrumbs for us to follow.