Sorry but the translator is mucking the story up. I have read three different translations from three sites & each have messed up this story up so badly it’s a crime. I love the story but these translations are giving Me a migraine.

Blackmail for reading a story on a free reading site. A joke. Great story, I’m gone. Good way to lose fans holding them hostage. Good Luck !

Good action, great creativity.

Nothing forgotten, no excuses, no regrets. Good insight. Keep it simple but never forget the Audience’s consumption of your forethought. Always leaving them trembling with expiation. Good job, keep it up.

Naw, all growth is painful.

Sacrifices are needed for growth. Some growing is painful & some are not worthy.

Excellent thought out ideas story wise.