Crazy_E

Who wants to be bothered reading the same sentence again and again in each chapter? It makes me feel like it's there to lengthen the chapter and make the story boring at times reading the same status effect when it's meaningless if you know what it's going to do, if you ask me.

Going for a Dr. Doom build, I see you

Chuck Norris didn't die; he went on a new game+ on a new planet.

aka Build-a-B****

I didn't know your game, my bad for assuming

lol

I like the concept, but that writing quality is what you need to fix man. no matter how many chapters you have, that poor quality will kill people's interests of the story. Plus what's the point of giving people ki if they can't make their own techniques with it.