DemiGodMaari

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter. great writing as always.

nicely paced and written. thanks for the chapter.

nice

good chapter

Good job! Keep it up! Wonder who this woman is though. Future wife? Or one of the future wives? lol.

Protagonist deserves all the talk he is getting. In two chapters he's a better character than I could ever write in all my life. This is why I expect great things from this story. We are only in the prologue too.

Really good chapter. Maybe a better written one than chapter 1, even though it offered less than chapter 1. This story has a ton of potential. I am so excited to see how it develops.

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but brownish-blue eyes, huh? not bad.