CianNomer

A beautifully written story with a great protagonist that uses parallels and sophistry to subtly explain himself to us. With every chapter, he kept getting more content on him, and with every chapter, we kept wanting even more. He is the GOAT in this story for sure.

thanks for the chapter

great chapter

Hm, interesting. Adrian continues to be the highlight of the story.

gothic paintings are awesome

Grt chapter.

nice intriguing middle portion. it's def a future it seems, a very dreadful one at that. but are we going to get there in the story or was it as alt timeline?

Hm, you got a point.

Nice. I like Joan. She seems like a wholesome older sister type. I can get behind that. Now who's this new chick?

You are trying to write a really interesting protagonist here. Good luck!