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Pj7722hReplied to CCVDI also was confused and thought maybe I misread or misunderstood something 😳
At that time, Li Shiyan said that he had a disciple, Mo Chusheng, who was very picky. The disciple he chose had to be liked by the eldest disciple.- Pj771dCommented
just when I was thinking the author didn't follow the norm. . 😕
Lin Yaxiang thought for a moment. This kid was soft-hearted. Now that he had hurt his hand, she wanted to take this opportunity to cultivate a relationship with him. It would be more convenient to teach him in the future. - Pj771dCommented
if you won*
"Yayun, what if you lose? Young Master Meng initially said that he would marry you if he won..." Dong Xiyun added. - Pj772dReplied to Immortal_Goddess
I think author meant father...
In this house, his eldest sister was taken seriously when she spoke. Not only that, but she always stuck to her words, unlike his mother, who would always lie to him. His eldest brother and brother were completely unreliable. They were always coaxing him and hitting him. - Pj773dCommented
literally made me laugh out loud😂😂😂😂😂
The horse suddenly stomped from the irritation. It then moved its butt, and... a pile of fresh manure dropped, landing directly on Xia Yayun's head. The warmth drove her insane! - Pj777dCommented
didn't it say earlier that ghosts couldn't cry tears?
She suddenly started crying tears of joy. Although she didn't care about her appearance, it wasn't like she wanted to look like neither human nor ghost either. - Pj778dCommentedSeeing that his wife was cold and silent, Qi Zhenbai felt a little anxious. He had never been afraid of anyone in his life, but now, he was afraid that his wife would be angry and ignore him. He pursed his lips and asked in a low voice, "Does it hurt?" Seeing that his wife didn't speak, the man coaxed and said carefully, "Does it really hurt? Shall I blow on it for you?"
- Pj7714dCommented
pretty sure he said young, not small.....
Chi Shuyan had memories of her past life and could be considered an adult; she knew what the man meant with his look and that "not small anymore." - Pj7723dCommented
had? u don't anymore?
I had medium-long straight brown hair which I grew over my forehead in the front and fell over my left ear to the side, and I had dark green eyes and brown skin. I was wearing a dark blue hoodie and jeans, both very worn out, as were all my clothes. And I also wore a face mask whenever I went out, in order to hide my face...and also because the air in this place is filthy, and I literally can't afford to get sick since I have basically no money. - Pj7723dCommented
first sentence, present tense. The second sentence, and it's a very long run-on sentence, has both present and past tense. please pick a tense and watch out on run-on sentences... that one was almost the whole paragraph. .
I'm short and on the thin side, I wasn't very strong but I was confident in my speed and agility...which probably isn't a normal thing to say when introducing yourself, but I spend most of my life running away from angry white men, so 'normal' doesn't really apply to me. - Pj7730dCommented
earthly*
Avalina hugged her son tightly. Deep down, she knew Ashton had more responsibilities to worry about than just earth and his family. As a mother, taking care of the earthy problems was the least she could do to ease his worries. - Pj7730dCommented
were not* just mindless....
These skeletons were just mindless frames but could use mana and martial techniques. From mages to warriors to tanks and archers... the horde was nothing short of a proper army! - Pj7730dCommented"Control your breathing, close your eyes and visualise your creation," Vulcan's words echoed in Ashton's mind, "It's not your meat to beat randomly. Construct a path, a plan, before executing your will."
- Pj771mthCommented
A better part*
Ashton had given Nirvana a month before he would return to kick their asses into the afterlife. A better path of the month was over, and it would take the skeletons another week or so to find a suitable torso replacement for the Lizardman. - Pj771mthCommented
dependant *
"So either you do as I say, or this city of yours will be left in dust before the reinforcements you are so depended on ever get a chance to fire a bullet at us." - Pj771mthCommented
or-->over
Lastly, Nico would have a moral advantage over Ashton and the Ghosts as he was fighting for his people and country while Ashton, a mercenary, would be fighting for money and rewards. Hence, people throughout the galaxy would believe Nico's words or his. - Pj771mthCommented
rabbited rabbit??🤣🤣🤣 I do believe you meant RABID rabbit 😁
Back when he had lost everything to the werewolves, if someone would have told him the mistress got killed by one of her people, even he would have been happy. Hell, he would be jumping around like a rabbited rabbit... - Pj771mthCommented
ummm his thigh UP to his knee? 🤔🤔🤔
But the reflection wasn't done yet. Rather than pulling out the dagger, the reflection dragged the knife up to his knee, slicing the thigh in half. - Pj771mthCommented
anyone else wondering about the rest of the sentence? "however he wasn't as clueless as the rest of them because unlike the rest of the team. "......uhh left us hanging bc even the following sentence doesn't complete this one...
Ashton sighed as he rolled in his bed. His thoughts were getting a bit erratic by now. However, he wasn't as clueless as the rest of them because unlike the rest of the team. After all, he had a way to know whether the Phantom was his father or not and the only thing he needed to find that out was one look. - Pj771mthCommented
Leon* had been . .
He made a rookie mistake by trusting Leon's word... no, he couldn't have possibly been swayed by just his words, could he? He had heard rumours about Leon's ability but never got to test it himself. It could be possible Darjud had been manipulating him all along and he didn't even notice it.