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No problem, love the novel! one of the best on the website if you ask me. all the best to you

"Liquefaction of pure man?" -> "Liquefaction of pure mana" ||||| '"Solidification," Xavier muttered and turned to Xavier's lower abdomen' -> "Solidification," Xavier muttered and turned to Eulene's lower abdomen

speed of lightning is 270,000 mph the fastest rifle bullet in the world goes 3180mph think lightning is faster than a bullet

"Xavier remembered the gigantic hoodlum and asked Xavier, [Everyone's so tall in your world. Why are you so short?] Near the start of the chapter, repeated xaviers name instead of using Eulene

Honestly cant recommend this novel enough, Victorian based setting with a 'magic' backdrop, there are multiple realms with a similar world of earth being the focus so far with elemental control being the main themes in magic, with another 'typical' chinese xianxia realm with cultivation, spirit roots sects etc. Novel so far is not focused on becoming strong as character are already very strong for the setting, and is more focused on solving mysteries and interacting with the magical 'government' if you will. updates every day, quite a lot of world building and a good development so far, with each main character being quite fleshed out.

Hey author, I just wanted to say that the plot armour is a tad strong mate, maybe tone it down a touch

Definitely a hidden gem, it's hard to find a good novel without a thousand clichés in it on this site as qidian seems to love novels that came from a factory, this novel is certainly very different to any I've read and I would recommend reading this, I love how each character is fleshed out and you can really see their own personality

They would become a sinner, when WW killed the previous inheritor of sin he became a sinner and so on

Small spelling error, slime talking about plans said 'faze', should be phase instead. Nice chapter and good to see Ed back