brett_hood

locked at chapter 5, then only going to 18 before having to purchase privilege, no thanks, I try to give lots of novels a chance but I can't even give a page of this one a chance til these issues get fixed.

doing the low-key hiding behind a mask cliché? learned my lesson will not buy chapters for books before reading all free anymore.. first few chapters were good enough I bought all thinking this would be a good book.. now though? wishing for a refund button

love the book, identical version sames names and everything just came up on kindle. if author is publishing this as light novel on Kindle then awesome I'll buy to continue story, if not at least author will know now.

thanks for the reply, I will most definitely finish the whole book then

have only read 30 chapters so far. but still enjoying it greatly. quick question and I'm requesting I guess a spoiler. but does MC remain a young kid through entire book? or is there a time skip? I am asking before I hit chapters I have to purchase.

so I'm the author, but I won't leave 5 stars. I've read enough to know my book doesn't rank that high, I Also know I need an editor. I'm working on that once I get more chapters and some reviews going. also my word count is varying to much. 1200 words in chapter 1 then over 3k in chapter 2. I'll work on that as well, please leave honest reviews so I can make the story better. I have alot of ideas swimming in my head but actually putting them down for once is a different experience for me.

need to release some new chapters, been waiting for a month and change , hopefully you won't keep us waiting much longer since it's killing me

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola