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WTH44811dCommentedlet the face slapping begin
She looked at Lu Chuwan and then at Fu Zhi. Even though both of them were her granddaughters, the difference between them was worlds apart.- WTH44811mthCommented
Mr Author, I would live to see the Family Head trope turned upside down. Make him a friendly, easy-going person in appearance, but a demon in his convictions. For example, instead of having the cold appearance and seeming withdrawn from others, make him very charming and popular and difficult to insult until his bottom line is crossed. In the case of this story, he wouldn't get angry at his nephew for annuling the engagement immediately. He would even offer to host an engagement party for the new couple. At the party, he would smilingly praise his nephew for following his heart, but he and his parents would from now on no longer be part of the family.
The men following Fu Chen exchanged glances. Young Master Yuxiu is doomed.detailHeartwarming Aristocratic Marriage: Influential Master's Wife-Chasing StrategyUrban · Yuechu Jiaojiao - WTH44812mthCommented
deliciously in this context is an adverb describing the way that "looked" was performed and not the appearance of the dumpling
Mo Yun looked over, the fried dumplings did look quite deliciously. - WTH44812mthCommented
transition is a change in something. a transaction is an exchange
His legal transition, non-legal transition, Yu Qi copied everything. Yu Qi would go through the information when she got time later. - WTH44812mthCommented
years? you mean the 1 right? 1 year in university
As for Meng Qiang Su, she didn't know why Meng Qiang Su would want to do that. Their encounter was two years ago And it was only that one time. Was Meng Qiang Su still held the grudge about it after all these years? - WTH44812mthCommented
It should be "slandered"
Chapter 21: Being Slander - WTH44812mthCommented
"want" should be removed from the 3rd sentence
'Master, don't worry. You can choose whatever you want. Space allows you want to enter with your body or only your consciousness. Well, if you want to improve your body, it's better to enter it with your body. Here, we have a lot of books to improve your body. If you only want to study, you may enter with your consciousness." Bo Ya explained. - WTH44812mthCommented
"going to do" and "can not help" or "will not help"
'Master, what are you doing to do if your boss could not help you?' The question from Bo Ya made her stop. - WTH44812mthCommented
The last sentence is a little off. It should say "She could not do anything at all at the time" or "...in all that time"
Actually, Yu Qi did not know why Wang Fu Ya ignited those girls until she heard the conversation between Wang Fu Ya and Wang Ha Na. They spoke about her grade getting worse after the bullying. She could not do anything at all that time. - WTH44812mthCommented
"I am really come back" should be "I have really come back" or "I really am back"
"Yeah, thank you, Bo Ya. I will come back tomorrow." She closed her eyes. In the blink of eye, she was already in her room when she opened back her eyes. 'I am really come back. I never thought that I would get something like this cheat. This is going to be fun.' - WTH44815mthCommented
loaned should be borrowed
"Three months ago, your father became injured. To save him, your brother loaned five gold coins to hire doctors. Now, with all the interest, he owes us 100 gold coins." - WTH44817mthCommented
ambient is an adjective ambience is the noun
The three girls started to observe the ambient. - WTH44817mthCommentedCh 49 New Profession
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mysterious is an adjective. it should either be a mystery or another noun should be there as well
Yin Yue looked at Gu Hai and said, "How can you do that? Everyone has their own path in life. There's no need to force things." Then, she said to Jiang Ming, "The Tower of Trials is a mysteriousdetail10,000 Years In A Cultivation Sect: I Obtained A Powerful Technique From The StartEastern · Li Baijin - WTH44819mthCommented
concatenation is a series of interconnected things or events.
[Small Healing Pills Concatenation (3 MB)] - WTH44819mthCommented
I'd just like to point out that this paragraph refers to the mc as a high school and not a student in high school. Nit picky (American idiom for overly specific), yes but there it is
Alex is still studying and is a senior highschool in his last year. - WTH44819mthCommented
I know this is simply a cultural thing, but when I see that something is happening "later" I assume it's at some time in the distant future and not a couple of minutes after. I normally say that I'll do something in a few minutes or after the call
"Good. I'll send you the address later. Bye." Arlan disconnected the call and sent his home address to Krizia. He then saved her phone number to his contacts. - WTH44819mthCommented
"Stunningly" is an adverb, which is used to describe or emphasize a verb, and isn't normally used by itself. "Stunned" would be appropriate
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The structure is just different from the norm. "Have a coffee chat" should be "have a chat over coffee"
After staying in the study for two minutes, Leo said, "Since there is no problem with the installation, let's go down and have a coffee chat." - WTH44819mthCommentedCh 94 Can't Wait