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Youruizzu3dCommented'his/her' can be shortened to 'their' which is gender neutral and is often used in situations where you don't want to name a singular gender or fear to misgender
"That's less than I expected. But there are two types of slaves, those who are not bound by a slave contract, and those who are bound by a slave contract. I'm sure you all remember the piece of paper that has the slave bound to his/her owner, correct?"- Youruizzu2mthPosted
One of the best fanfics I've read, worldbuilding is brilliant, character development was done well, romance is very subtle and doesn't interfere with the story and, most importantly in my opinion, the power progression was done excellently. It's definitely one of my favorites right now. Thank you for this great work of art!
- Youruizzu2mthCommented
Woohoo! New chapter! Thank you
Money and time - Youruizzu3mthReplied to Youruizzu
This comment was supposed to be on a sentence a bit further...
[The New World, The Ruins of Naufragium Island] - Youruizzu3mthCommented
revenge -> ravaged?
[The New World, The Ruins of Naufragium Island] - Youruizzu4mthCommentedCh 7 Chapter 3: Ability Discovered
- Youruizzu4mthCommented
dungeons -> portals (because Mr J's not a gamer)
"Of course. Anything for Sky. Come, you three. If you are all going back you need to learn some stuff about the dungeons I've been in." - Youruizzu6mthCommented
fate -> faith*
The fact that the Gods need fate makes it even more so as there will certainly be wars for believers as they are to a certain extent the source of their power. - Youruizzu8mthCommented
Hatsuhisa Hyuga*
As they return, Fang Mo doesn't forget about Hinata Hatsuhisa, occasionally teaching her some combat skills and sharing food from Steve's backpack. - Youruizzu8mthCommentedCh 9 T Virus III
- Youruizzu8mthCommentedCh 6 Zombies
- Youruizzu8mthReplied to Youruizzu
WN fricked up my comment for some reason, I hope it's readable
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fauna -> flora*fauna = animalsflora = plants
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Lexus -> Cyruz
This paragraph has been deleted. - Youruizzu9mthCommentedCh 5 The Tower (4)
- Youruizzu9mthCommentedCh 4 The Tower (3)
- Youruizzu10mthCommented
exploited -> revealed (or uncovered). I think it fits much better here
This paragraph has been deleted. - Youruizzu10mthCommentedCh 7 Escort Mission?!
- Youruizzu10mthCommentedCh 27 Chapter XVI: Choosing schools and visiting the staff maker