Nate_Gardea
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Nate_Gardea10hReplied to HambinoRanxPersonally i just want to enjoy the book, but there are parts in ur story that i feel are missing parts
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When did he wake up from being lodge in the mountain side and see a light
Ty responded, "No-no, I just saw this place lit up while sitting atop a mountain and decided to come see what it was. - Nate_Gardea1dCommented
I dont think we need the “we have;” part of her question but just my opinion im not best when if comes to grammer either
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Also we got another repeat paragraphs
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Ok what with these little paragraphs? I thought they were like foreshadows of events that couldve happened but time was somehow reversed
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Did nana or ty say this?
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Typo?
Suddenly, The crow transformed into a man clad in armor. - Nate_Gardea2dReplied to HambinoRanx
Oh i get that it just threw me off on the sudden change. Where is ur link at?
After a thoughtful pause, Ty responded, "I'm afraid I don't, but if you give me some of the info, I will make sure to let you know if I do. Does that sound fair?" - Nate_Gardea2dReplied to HambinoRanx
So they go from threatening to one another to oh becareful about this one person.
After a thoughtful pause, Ty responded, "I'm afraid I don't, but if you give me some of the info, I will make sure to let you know if I do. Does that sound fair?" - Nate_Gardea2dCommented
Wait who are they talking about? Is ty still being threatened by the general or is the general warning ty about someone. Im so lost
After a thoughtful pause, Ty responded, "I'm afraid I don't, but if you give me some of the info, I will make sure to let you know if I do. Does that sound fair?" - Nate_Gardea2dCommented
I dont think her name is needed the second time
Just when she was about to have some peace, Nana found herself to be Nana suddenly smacked into the wall, before bouncing off, tumbling onto the nearby couch and finally ending up on the ground. - Nate_Gardea2dCommented
Well would u rather be naked in ur human form?
Perplexed, Ty couldn't help but tug his sleeves with his hands and wonder aloud, "Where did these purple and black garbs come from?" - Nate_Gardea2dCommented
She just jinxed it
Unable to resist a lighthearted comment, Nana commented, "This trip seems smoother than your old one, Ty." - Nate_Gardea2dCommented
Did DK put his finger under her chin or did kirana?
He took the folder and replied, "Thanks, Kirana. Tell me, do you believe in coincidences?" He put a finger under her chin and continued, "Well, on rare occasions, sure, but more times than not, there's another force at play." - Nate_Gardea2dCommented
So ty getting his open domain he can “store” allies in
"No offense, you two, but I already have limited space." - Nate_Gardea2dCommented
Oh so this is how the infinity guantlet was made now how did thanos get it?
The metals on the gauntlet's outer surface began to melt and reshape themselves. They encased around Ty's skeletal arm, forming a unique hybrid of gauntlet and skeleton. Over a dozen clear orbs erupted from Ty's chest, swirling and merging with the central orb on the gauntlet. The entire ensemble emitted a mesmerizing, bright blue glow. - Nate_Gardea2dCommented
Now someone just need to put a cat coughing up a hair ball here
In response, the sword let out a low rumble and, with a coughing noise, ejected a gauntlet. It clattered onto the ground between them. Ty let out a shocked gasp as he picked it up, his bony fingers wrapping around it with a mix of curiosity and surprise. - Nate_Gardea3dReplied to HambinoRanx
Ok got it i thought the ty question had been deleted during editing
"I'm still trying to figure that out right now as well, however, I believe if you force your soul to rest, we will be able to minimize that. However, the pain from the flames still continues to slowly build up, even after I'm taking away half of the pain from you." - Nate_Gardea3dCommented
I was wondering about the guanlet
Apologizing, the sword floated in the air and said, "Sorry, your Demon King, sir. I just came to offer a parting gift to Ty, one that I meant to give him back when we were on Alexiera." - Nate_Gardea3dCommented
What the demon lord trying to figure out? Did ty ask him a question?
"I'm still trying to figure that out right now as well, however, I believe if you force your soul to rest, we will be able to minimize that. However, the pain from the flames still continues to slowly build up, even after I'm taking away half of the pain from you."