Shamen

Lil does he know he just insulted the crafter

Oh dame going to flip

Liam better be recording all this

Interesting

Ill have to give him a shot i havent read his books yet ive got a ton of books to get caught up on

Now we appreciate your dedication to a good story but make sure you take care of yourself. Only you can control how ur story goes. We can make suggestions and theories but that all they are. Do what you think is best with your story. Each of us has a different style of reading and writing. Also on the topic of stockpiling chapters when doing this i think you should make them easy to write chapters. Meaning ones that you can dish out with lil thought. Sometimes they called filler chapters. I personally loved reading “Is that a wisp?” On webnovel. Another good example are the Dragon Ball anime and naruto. Though do becareful too much filler can ruin a story or throw it off. Sorry this got chatty i just get really excited when i read book and stories i like or watch. For me it helps get away from the real world

I wouldnt say you ruined my experience if you had we wouldnt be talking like this. Ive left storys partly read on here cuz their story wasnt matching up

Oh i read that part but not the part he wakes up sees a light in distance goes to it finds a door attempting to open it with his powers. I thought he had woken up to her shining a light on him when she found him lodge in mountain

Personally i just want to enjoy the book, but there are parts in ur story that i feel are missing parts

When did he wake up from being lodge in the mountain side and see a light

I dont think we need the “we have;” part of her question but just my opinion im not best when if comes to grammer either

Also we got another repeat paragraphs

Ok what with these little paragraphs? I thought they were like foreshadows of events that couldve happened but time was somehow reversed

Did nana or ty say this?

Typo?

Oh i get that it just threw me off on the sudden change. Where is ur link at?

So they go from threatening to one another to oh becareful about this one person.

Wait who are they talking about? Is ty still being threatened by the general or is the general warning ty about someone. Im so lost

I dont think her name is needed the second time