continue please. I'm enjoying this

author. PLEASE !!!These short filler chapters are killing me. and the long wait in between isn't helping 😭😭😭

another impressive work from the author. I'm really enjoying this book.I noticed there's been a lot of repetition in the book. it was especially obvious in this chapter. please look into that. Thanks again for the chapter

I'm batman

well this is a pleasant surprise 😁

Happy birthday author-san!! [img=recommend]

why, oh why do they always gender bend Harry? I hope I'm wrong

This is the first Harry Potter and JJk crossover story I've seen but it's so well written too!! I love the effort you're putting into setting up the lore and history of the story. I look forward to the ending of this story. it'll definitely be a fulfilling journey

I decided to stockpile chapters and I have to say, seeing so many chapters ahead of this has got to be one of the best Christmas presents I've gotten today

it's a great chapter. I know for some the world building might seem boring but I can't stress enough how important this is. Action is good and I love action but this . especially with how you're doing it creates a high quality that is not easy to find.I've been thinking a lot about your idea of the potions being stories and potion making being a kind of ritual. Have you read lord of the mysteries? Because that is what comes to mind every time I think about it. so here's a humble opinion from me. I think you should do some research on the pathways, their potion recipients and the rituals that are used in the higher sequences and see if you can incorporate it into your fiction. I was thinking you can set it as some kind of end goal for Hagrid. "The man who brewed godhood in a bottle" has a nice ring to it don't you think 🤔You could design your own pathway (cuz I don't think any of the originals would fit in here) and have him experiment, discover and create over the course of the story. That aside, I'm curious how you plan on weaving Minerva's life outside of school there's already your issue with side characters but I'm sure you'll do just fine. With Tom, I can already see there's going to be a few chapters with nothing but political talk which I don't really fancy. Oh well...I wish you success in your writing. endless inspiration and all that. complements of the season!! 🎉🎉

I have to say, I am confused. we're talking about a transcendent being here. it doesn't make sense that he feels cornered by an ant. it doesn't make sense to me at all.

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there's a lot of promise in this.

Erica. let's keep it simple. no harem or NTR please

Is this an au? cuz I don't think toshiro was in the academy at the same time as rukia and Rengi

please don't

if you were serious about this, I think it'll make the story a lot more interesting [img=Smug]

I vote for this

😂😂😂

thanks for the chapter