ArcAng3l

FINALLY! A Young Justice fic that isn’t so bloody generic. Good character development, plot well adapted to suit the MC. And I love how you gave him a Spartans mind set. Keep them chapters coming, this story has s gold.

Tracey or both

What’s this actresses name again.

First couple chapters are good. Can’t wait for the next post! You don’t have many new Percy Jackson on this, so keep them chapters coming.

Sure why not

So far the book is really good. There aren’t many fanfics of The Original series that have as good character/world development on this platform. I look forward to more chapters.

You should definitely go with your Gambit In Young Justice idea. It sounds very good to me

Why would you make him shout that? No ofence of course, but that was so clieche. Side note great chapter 👍🏾

Use both, as long as you can find a good way to bring both together I don’t see why not. So if you can go for it.

Zara