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Thicc_Lil_Unit1yrCommentedmore than*
Finally, the Russian Prong managed all things cyberspace. The recent schism caused by the Stranger meant that the Italian and Japanese Prongs had lost a sizable amount of their territory in Cyberspace, but surprisingly, they held onto more then Aldrich thought.- Thicc_Lil_Unit1yrReplied to Vastoking
deadass bruv it would've made some sense if he paced at like 25 a day, and then slowly increment by 5 if he feels like he could handle it
197….198…..199….200! - Thicc_Lil_Unit1yrCommented
au contraire, this gym instructor sounds extensively based, not letting the opinions of those he leads to tarnish what he enjoys
Like what dude? On the outside, you have such a tough front. This super muscular, confident guy outlook. And you were into this sort of thing? Where is the 'manliness' you taught us during the gym training? - Thicc_Lil_Unit1yrCommented
Tax Evasion indeed
Recently more and more people are abandoning this place and moving to other regions. Well, he actually can't blame them. This region has almost nothing to offer. So why should they stay here to pay taxes and suffer? - Thicc_Lil_Unit1yrCommented"Why won't you die!?" shouted Seraph in frustration. He put a hand at his chest, nursing a burning bruise from the uppercut that had sent him flying.
- Thicc_Lil_Unit2yrCommentedIf you take a step one day that I don't think I can follow, I will tell you. Then, you can turn me mindless, I don't care. This body isn't mine anymore. It's yours. So do what you want with it.
- Thicc_Lil_Unit2yrReplied to _VoidSlayer_
- Thicc_Lil_Unit2yrReplied to Tarbo
one of the few based heroes, shame he might die in the later chapters
But even with all these injuries wracking him, Minuteman smiled at Aldrich. "I don't know who you are and why you're doing this, hell, I don't even know if you're hero or villain, but I still want to thank you for saving all the civilians here." - Thicc_Lil_Unit2yrReplied to Tarbo
bruh
There was even a massive terroristic cult called the New Machines that believed in discarding the weakness of flesh and becoming full mechanoids. - Thicc_Lil_Unit2yrCommented
Glory to the Omnissiah!
There was even a massive terroristic cult called the New Machines that believed in discarding the weakness of flesh and becoming full mechanoids. - Thicc_Lil_Unit2yrCommented"You know, you never should underestimate a person. Especially if they become Boundless." A voice boomed out from Soul's headless body. "How?! How can you speak?!" Ezrahel asked him in shocked confusion, watching as Soul's head re-attached itself to his body. "It's called a skill issue, Ezrahel. I just can." Soul taunted him, grabbing him by his neck and violently flinging him into the wall, pulling Tsuyukagiri from his chest as he did for that extra damage.
- Thicc_Lil_Unit2yrCommented
Tyson, don't break the fourth wall, it's the author's job to have to fix it again
"Sam, I think that would be possible," Tyson interrupted, "What if we are in reality characters from a story. You know like in those superhero comics! Where there are alternate universes, variants of us! Oh… that would suddenly explain the zombies, Viviane's ice powers. We are the side characters of this story! I'm the comic relief, you are the female sidekick who is more powerful than the MC, Viviane is the mentor of the MC, and Lynn he is the MC!" Tyson was excited. He looked like a five-year-old kid very proud of his deduction. - Thicc_Lil_Unit2yrCommented
chuuni mode, activated*
"Then, if you are ready; gaze into despair," the werewolf declared and brought his free hand to his face before bending his fingers a bit as if he was holding a mask. "[Mask of Phobos.]" - Thicc_Lil_Unit2yrCommented"This is a serious moment, you." Stella bonked Valera's helmetless head with a karate chop. "Keep that horniness in check."
- Thicc_Lil_Unit2yrCommented"ORA! ORA! ORA! ORA!" Valera madly punched against the approaching walls with all her might, her strength significantly boosted by the red aura of her [Berserker's Rage]. Each of her punches gouged out significant craters in the wall, but it was like putting a dent into Styrofoam – the holes just bounced back and sealed over as quickly as they were made.
- Thicc_Lil_Unit2yrCommented
FOR THE COLONY
[Bonus chapter] The Chrysalis - Thicc_Lil_Unit2yrCommentedValera and Stella both gave Fler'Gan a death stare that made him go quiet. Fler'Gan truly was like an old grandpa, complaining about his painful lower back, young people this, women that, and whatnot.
- Thicc_Lil_Unit2yrPosted
Very well, looks like I'm gonna be doing this again. First on the itinerary, the issues of capitalization and incorrect usage of commas, apostrophes and other such things. It's just sporadic, one moment you're reading a semi decent sentence, the next it feels like it was done with little to no regard to how it looks. There is a genuine feeling of physical pain from my body as I read the first few chapters. The transitions from one aspect to the next is sorta sloppy. It could be better, but I'm pretty sure that it could also be worse, so I guess there's that. The character is simplistic for the first few bits, and that part is understandable because this review was made when there were only still six chapters, so consume with a grain of salt is all that I can advise the person reading this review. The updates aren't completely specified yet, since it's not even a week old, but it could be decent. And finally, the world. Good old Terra being such a wondrous playground for so many creators to tear asunder for their own narratives. It's not exactly new, but it's no that stale either. Overall, it's a three out of five from me chief. Grammar, punctuation, and capitalization are most likely the things that you'll have to polish up first. This baby has the potential, but it just needs the nice polish and varnish is all.
- Thicc_Lil_Unit2yrCommented
she really just be laying ICBMS just about anywhere huh?
Elaria called down an intercontinental ballistic missile on him… - Thicc_Lil_Unit2yrReplied to HANA_4345