it's unnecessary is wat is, they're plot holes to what he wrote it might be good enough for u but not for me. n like I mentioned earlier it was stated that the fight should only be a Taijutsu only fight, then he went straight ahead n used his Technique that's not logical if it was in the real Naruto any student using Technique in a Taijutsu only spar calls for infraction, he lost by default of breaking the rules , it'll be like saying academy Shikamaru using Shadow Possession yeah they're not gonna let it slide

or ransom him back, it might not be the case but high probability n so picture this in his case of course he'll hide

should've gone for the Rokushiki, as self proclaimed One Piece fan he should be able to know how to activate those two Haki, some of The Marine Six Powers on other hand is still a not clear how to use'em

The Rokushiki 🤦🏿‍♂️

seems in this verse Rebekah would be closer to Elijah than Klaus, not bad BTW just interesting 🤔

what about teleportation

yeah but I noticed yesterday n wanted to give a correction, don't worry even if u don't others dat read later would be cleared of confusion.

they're supposed to be the elite n yeah in most recent times the most trusted too but I don't think chuunin are allowed if they are I don't remember, the way I remember most of'em are elite jonin (the captains), jonins n special jonins that show promise or a bit over talented

how about now

Demigod literally means Half-god, u can use Part-god or Half-god (Demigod) never both at the same time. "Part-Half-god"

I get "Sentry" the other two not so much, I mean "Superior" sounds too much n just after he berated Mark's "Invincible", n "Superior-man" is way worse, Superman's ok but he's a kid n a newbie I mean it's obvious especially with the no mask, he can still workshop it but it's really not the best right now, but with "Superboy" he can still transition it to "Superman" later it'll be even more effective n a banger plus it's a homage to the El's since he's using their Symbol n all he can even add d "S" isn't just an S but a flowing river of hope like in the OG, but overall yeah "Sentry" is better than "Superboy" (name by the way not character, obviously Superboy is my fave)

yeah I know but I was asking if it'll be implemented cuz they are things there dat are dope n it explained more of the world building, simple example is snake not having fangs as child (due to birth or accident I forgot)

True, then it comes down to two routes depending on ur initial capital, if it's much or enough buy it after the announcement cuz that's when the stocks would be at it's lowest but if it's a bit low or u aren't confident with the money being enough to buy a lot buy it when he gets kidnapped after it rises a bit n u get influx of cash save them n buy more after the announcement, it'll just show u have faith in Stark Industries at most if someone gets suspicious

I know from Sunny dats y I said Eren said it better, better yet Kenny was more spot on. Don't know y u were

eh bro, I didn't read the next comment when I was writing this so how would I know then sides ur saying chill like I find wat u wrote offensive or was offensive to u, I was just helping make a correction if it sounded offensive to u sorry then wasn't my. no worries I dropped the fic anyway

I Stand Corrected