Bro. You copy another person's work WORD FOR WORD, don't credit or link the Original work and it's not even a translation but you link your p a t r e o n, have some shame. Thats embarrassing.

I really shouldn't get my hopes up for Danmachi fanfics but I did and was disappointed. I could list all the reasons for dropping but I can't be asked to write all that, keep in mind I was ONLY 8 chapters in. It got that annoying. There are positives but the negatives are not something I can ignore, hence my review. I usually wouldn't bother to write a review for just another story I drop but this one was particularly annoying so I gave it 2 stars.

Original story link? (You should put the link to the original story in the description)................................................................................................

"sO dON't rEaD iT tHen" Butt hurt much?

The best description I have for this story is, over the top and slightly cringe (And I've only read a couple chapters). It might be readable if you haven't read many Soul Land fanfics. The main character and his dad feel out of place in the Douluo Dalu setting. Both have similar names to characters from Sealed Divine Throne (another story from the Douluo Dalu author). So if it's meant to be some cross over it would make sense why they feel out of place. The writing quality is pretty good and the updates seem fine. It's just the mismatch between the MC and the setting of the story which feels very jarring to read.

This story has to be satire.........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

So the original story with a tag-along. Nice. I always do find stories like this creative and worth reading........................................

Auto 5 starts because this is the first Vanguard involved fanfiction I've seen on this site...............................................................

I agree but Xiao Wu isn't far behind.

From what I remember she was a very annoying character. And as far as Douluo Dalu's female characters go she was easily one of the worst.

Please no Xiao Wu.

I'm so lost...............................................................................................................................................

Yeah, I was the same. In the first part of Naruto, most people hated him because we knew nothing about him but when people learned about his past, it hit hard.

How convenient 🙃

I know, what I was mocking was that our "genius" MC somehow thinks it would have been a good idea to give everyone cultivation techniques.

This is supposedly a genius MC and someone who knows the dark side of humans. Did he not refuse to give his mind-reading powers away at the start because he couldn't trust people?

Nvm

Buy herbs, did he get money from Ye Zong? Wasn't he adopted like 2 days ago?

You do know his father was at the head of the coup right? Not to mention his mother was in on it. The peace treaty from Kumo was a cover for them to get the Byakugan. If the Coup were to happen, no matter which side wins, what's left of Konoha would come out severely weakened. Kumo and Iwa would definitely go against Konoha, and Suna would side with Konoha. This would have been the next Great Shinobi War. Even if Konoha wins the war how many do you think would die? Itachi grew up in war times so he knew how bad it could get, that and wanting to keep his brother alive is the reason he did what he did. He was never meant to be likable for killing his family, he was meant to be likable because he gave up everything for his brother, Konoha and peace. I feel like you're grasping at straws to dislike Itachi, that or you misunderstood his character.