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Kevin_Pitts9mthCommentedI call BS any red blooded man see's a woman who is insanely beautiful would see her and instantly put 2 and 2 together.
At the contest among the champions of all shelters, Han Sen had seen Yu Qianxun, but did not pay attention to her. Since she did not tell Han Sen who she was, he did not recognize her.- Kevin_Pitts9mthCommentedCh 26 CH6.5
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I mean there is no such thing as a fair fight, an honorable duel in a supposed life or death situation is stupid. Always fight to win
Qin Xuan did not expect that Dollar would sink so low to make her unable to use her power. Now she was only happy that Dollar was not an archer, or she would be even more miserable. - Kevin_Pitts3yrReplied to Tactblast
Cool maybe you can get in on the corrections in the story and then you can come back to grammatically teach me. 😘
It speed was like a black tornado, fast and fierce and scary. - Kevin_Pitts3yrReplied to Ty_Anthony_Tkalcec
With the ability gains and losses our MC sustains screw it give him a time traveling beast soul
There was no chance for the evolvers to retreat as well. The path connecting the valley and outside was so narrow that only one man could pass at a time. In addition, their speed was far worse than the golden rock worm king. As the group of people reached the path, a better half of them had already been killed by the super golden rock worm king. Only three men made it to the past. - Kevin_Pitts3yrReplied to Curium255
The "sudden" bestowed royalty for queen killed it I will agree to the year plus thing but ehh lazy folks gonna lazy.
"A sacred-blood pet Golden-Horn Lion? That is not fair! How is the Snow Charmer supposed to compete with that?" - Kevin_Pitts3yrReplied to Curium255
that's impressive in two comments you spelled two separate words incorrectly
While Son of Heaven was still in shock, he saw the Snow Charmer raise her lance again. A flaming bird of fire soared through the sky, looking like a phoenix, raining fire down on the battlefield. - Kevin_Pitts3yrReplied to Curium255
See it's an attempt at getting the attention of the author / translator, we are literally paying for this. And we are all being bent over the barrel by them upping their word count by all the unnecessary words. Plus you must not be a very immersive reader or it'd be glaringly obvious. Plus why complain the comments are just that, you don't have to read all the comments to understand the story. So hit the bricks
"A sacred-blood pet Golden-Horn Lion? That is not fair! How is the Snow Charmer supposed to compete with that?" - Kevin_Pitts3yrReplied to Curium255
Don't worry you will Queen will turn into the queen
The Demon had been totally restrained by the attack, and no matter what beast soul it had or at what quality, it could not overcome the Snow Charmer's bombardment. They were both royal spirits, yet the Demon could not compete with her. - Kevin_Pitts3yrCommented
look 4 more words that can be used to up the word count any time they feel like saying his abilities.
"His name is Lei Heng Wu. He may not hail from a family of any particular notoriety or fame, but his family does possess a special skill of sorts. It is called Giant Thunderbolt Sacred Lance. I have seen it in action, and it is wickedly powerful. He is a top elite and has not pledged allegiance to any guild or cause just yet. I am also a good friend of his, which may be the connection we need to get him to join you," Wang Yuhang said. - Kevin_Pitts3yrReplied to DaoistYfnivZ
it's so they can bump up the word count
It was strange, though. Wang Yuhang was a talented warrior, and in terms of power, the peacock crossbow was the only thing that would give Han Sen an edge if they were ever to duel. Wang Yuhang was almost as good as the Queen, and it was a shame he lacked the self-confidence he needed to drive him forward. - Kevin_Pitts3yrCommented
Ahh yes sneak in another unnecessary word we always refer to her as queen. But in this instance it's the queen
It seemed as if Heavenly Go had something to do with the Chen family; otherwise, why would Chen Ran care so dearly? For this, Han San wanted to push it. Han Sen had always wondered why the Queen was the only who had been able to learn it. No matter how difficult the skill was to learn, there were many students in the Ares Martial Hall. It would be impossible for them not to select another student to learn Heavenly Go. - Kevin_Pitts3yrCommented
Goes to jump forgets the injuries and face plants 🤣
"It's so strong!" Han Sen was so happy, he almost jumped with joy. He quickly went to retrieve the feather. - Kevin_Pitts3yrReplied to Andrew_LaFortune
ahhh ok those kinds
As the holy angel brushed by the vines, they broke one by one. The giant flower quickly shrank and made spooky noises. The remaining vines started to shake and came at her again like the chains of death. - Kevin_Pitts3yrReplied to Austin_McDowell
still the grammatical errors are ridiculous we are paying to read this and have to guess and do hypotheticals on what is going on
The shrill scream made everyone feel dumbstruck. They all stopped moving and looked to Han Sen and the man with a broken arm was rolling around on the floor. - Kevin_Pitts3yrCommented
In 1st he says how rare arrow souls were now he's just all willy nilly going to find a bolt soul gtfo
"I suppose it doesn't matter. I'll formulate a few steel bolts for it and think about getting beast soul bolts further down the line." Han Sen tucked the crossbow away, realizing that its usage wouldn't be as simple as he had hoped. However, even without the high-end bolts that would be best to use, it should still be pretty powerful. - Kevin_Pitts3yrCommented
Couldn't cellular be a better word?
As Han Sen watched her, a strange feeling developed. He felt as if he could see the flow of Queen's body and witness the changes going on inside her at a granular level. - Kevin_Pitts3yrReplied to Dennis_Wallin
Right it's like they forget the terms they set in previous chapters
"Let's go find out!" Han Sen's face was vibrant with excitement, and he looked genuinely happy at the prospect. If he could hunt down a super creature with minimal effort, even if he did not receive a beast soul, eating its meat would be good enough. - Kevin_Pitts3yrCommented
Where are they running on water? Seems a bit senseless to be running in a circle on an island
The wasps were way too fast. Despite his breakneck speed, the wasp had now caught up to Han Sen.