this story is starting to drag. place is slow and lead character is no longer engaging. she's floundering

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

she's kind of stupid. does she know how to think? when is she going to tell him anything. lol how can her protect her if he doesn't know where the danger can come from

She's pretty stupid. she keeps putting herself in situations. after a while, she deserves what she gets

don't get the point of a whole chapter to cover this. why not a paragraph that says, "nothing goes bad. "

Don't care for when they drag it out. 👍

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

This was the first online book that I absolutely loved from beginning to the end. I really love the fact that a lot of the main supporting characters also had great endings. I feel like this was really ended well