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Slothful_Hedonist1yrReplied to Kw0zMan....it's been soooo long and this fanfic's been dropped so it probably isn't even that relevant but yeah....I agree. Dunno how I forgot that lol. Although, its quite sad that he has no choice but to lie. Anyway, have a good day friend. God there's nothing to read nowadays....
"So you know about my Titan shifting powers, but as time went on, I noticed how it wasn't so simple." Eren said. He decided to tell Mikasa about his energy because he knew she trusted him more than anybody else. That doesn't mean he was going to tell another person. Most likely Armin but he wasn't willing to tell his secrets to people he had no trust in. Don't get him wrong, just because he'd tell Mikasa this, doesn't mean he'll ever tell a single soul that he's not from this world. Not even his lover. He'd take that secret to the grave.- Slothful_Hedonist2yrCommentedCh 77 77. Little Fish
- Slothful_Hedonist2yrReplied to KirathenewGOD
Glad to be of help and thank you for listening :D
This chapter has been deleted. - Slothful_Hedonist2yrPosted
You should continue this again my friend. Even if we exclude the juicy smut scenes, ur story is still very interesting to me. And now that it has over a million views, I'm sure if u start writing back, u will be seeing visible results, yep. Anyways, this was a really interesting and enjoyable read for me. Hope to read more. Thank you very much. ^-^
- Slothful_Hedonist2yrCommented
You should continue this again my friend. Even if we exclude the juicy smut scenes, ur story is still very interesting to me. And now that it has over a million views, I'm sure if u start writing back, u will be seeing visible results, yep. Anyways, this was a really interesting and enjoyable read for me. Hope to read more. Thank you very much. ^-^
Ch 74 The Source - Slothful_Hedonist2yrCommentedCh 59 The Sharing
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No, its good. Its wholesome and fun. I like it very much, yep. ^,^
(A/N I don't know why I'm writing this. Someone plz end my suffering.) - Slothful_Hedonist2yrCommented
Thats kinda being ungrateful isn't it? Like this just shows that he doesn't really trust her that much or rather doesn't even truly love her. Most likely only lusts aftef her body and cuteness, basically its just hormonal attraction, huh...-,- He knows how much trust she puts it him, how much love and care she has for him, how much of her own she is willing to sacrifice because she does truly love him but our dear MC? heh. Pathetic to say the least imo lul.
"So you know about my Titan shifting powers, but as time went on, I noticed how it wasn't so simple." Eren said. He decided to tell Mikasa about his energy because he knew she trusted him more than anybody else. That doesn't mean he was going to tell another person. Most likely Armin but he wasn't willing to tell his secrets to people he had no trust in. Don't get him wrong, just because he'd tell Mikasa this, doesn't mean he'll ever tell a single soul that he's not from this world. Not even his lover. He'd take that secret to the grave. - Slothful_Hedonist3yrCommented
Don't write timeskip just leave a " --- " or something similar there. Writing timeskip breaks the immersion, yes.
This chapter has been deleted. - Slothful_Hedonist3yrCommentedCh 85 84. A Day Off Part-2
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My problem is with that 'Sin-Seal' thing. Of course I do know that you are writing this novel while keeping in mind the power level of Borutoverse. But tbh, I personally feel it would have been better if you introduced it in the later chapters after he achieved or is close to achieving the full potential of his cheat i.e., his unlocked bloodline, Sharingan/Rinnegan, etc. Giving him that OP but also annoying power right from the start became kinda frustrating to me lol since it also kinda nerfed him. I know nothing can be done, yes. But I would personally recommend that if u do have more OP ideas, please do so them after he has atleast achieved his potential. I am at currently at chapter 73 and trust me I feel really irritated when that damn higher dimensional guy interrupted the fight. Not that because your OC is bad or something. Just that if its a Naruto fanfic, I, as a fan, dont want some unrelated character spoiling the major moments of story (except the MC ofc ;)). I do think that this, as your first novel/fanfic, is good. Also, I'm just stating things I found as problematic, personally ofcourse lol. Would be still reading ahead tho. Good fan fic afterall.
This chapter has been deleted. - Slothful_Hedonist3yrReplied to JoKeRtHeBrOkEr
I will....lol
A doctor took the baby from the now dead women's arms. - Slothful_Hedonist3yrReplied to Dexterous_2099
She probably meant at the same time. Anyways, wentian probably can and will cuz he got plot armor mah boiiiiiiiiiiiii.
"And here," She pointed to another section, "This implies that the use of multiple partners for both the male and the female can have adverse effects. I think this art is only meant for a dedicated pair of dual cultivators. Both Divine Blazing Mountain and Murong Aiyin were doing it wrong."