enjoying the slow burn! I hate it when like page 2 and it's like super power I beat all bosses! end story.

So far I like the story but I feel these chapters need to flow more, more descriptions on how they get to places or do things. It feels very short and stuttered atm like. This happened, then this happened. We need to know the in between.

Why rush it? Don't need a 3 chapter novel consisting of MC gets powers and wins /end. Let's enjoy the ride. A slow burn company/kingdom building can happen with action scenes

Great Job so far! I still find it hard to remember the eastern style names. Id prefer unique names easier to remember.

this just doesn't work with a human frame its not faster than running. The human spine cant flex like a cheetah granting the speed.

story's getting good

I enjoyed it but right as it was rolling along we get an abrupt end. I hope there is book two or something. World buildings was good as well as motivation but its too soon.

Ugh I feel this was cut a bit short. i enjoyed the story though. I definitely think you had an easy 1000+ chapter world here

what? we are waiting to see azemo build a better nation and go on adventures. Him and ren can work into agrestial society

Remus is an old villian...already fought like twice

Thanks for sticking with it!

I hope your PC gets fixed!

Author, don't give up. I hope you are secretly writing a pile and just need to update!

If its a new born and they raise ot for several years, then yes they are now its parents. He chose to save her that comes with responsibilities

Were needing a big power up! Poor dustin can't take it!

Thanks for sticking with it! Excited to see some learning to happen. Hopefully our MC has learned boxing is not going to cut it in the world. Time to expand combat styles! As a side note expanding the experience on a high level fight can be helpful in learning about the world. Like how are these people generating their skills in combat. Where is the energy going to and from.

FYI this is a little mountain..Like a hill. Maybe a long hill but its not too high.

Not really, if every isekai does it, then its not unique or emotional its a plot device. I don't think he needs to tell anybody. Why? How does that make it emotional? If someone I was friends with tells me by the way im not your friend they died. Not sure if friendship will be continuing. The time to tell them was immediately otherwise waiting increases a rational person chances of just walking away.

gotta take care of mom!

Do I smell a Multi-Verse? I hope so they add so much fun to a story.