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My beautiful Alex is the girlfriend of a ramdom guy? And above all the less charismatic character of the whole series... I would have preferred even the perverted Abraham than the bad copy of ed... Well, I'll leave it here... good luck in your story
I don't understand the MC is a reincarnated adult who is supposed to be cold and calculating you brag about it... however at the slightest provocation he jumps and acts like a spoiled child but with the attitude of an untouchable prince... you should decide if Do you want to write your MC as someone cold and calculating or as the typical Prince of Chinese novels....
I found this chapter too hilarious, King was always my favorite OPM character hahahaha please, more chapters, here you will be seeing me one more faithful reader. You should also put girls who have never been seen in other fics like Levy, Laki, Bisca in the harem (it would be very funny to know that Makoto luckily had a daughter 7 years later 🤣🤣) etc etc etc